Hiya! Space here for a review!
Wow, this was absolutely AMAZING. The metaphors, style of writing, description, the topic--it all mixed together into a heart-wrenching, yet sadly relatable, poem. Some of my favorite lines were "The brutal brute that lays a nest in her mind spreads his eggs and continues to make a mass production", "Every single time she raises her voice and bellow down the faceless fiend feeding on her fallible mind, she cannot capture the moment or the focus or the f*cking reason why there is an anonymous ghoul resting upon her brain", and "Do you know anything about depression, about wanting the depths of depression, the epiphany of blackness, lethargy, hopelessness, and loneliness grabbing her soul into a deep, dark pit of despair feels like?"
It is all very true, ("--there is no direct solution as to why she has depression. She just does."), depression is never a choice or a grab for attention, it is very REAL and someone who does not experience it will never know the feeling of hopelessness and loneliness that plagues the brain, clouding all thought until the only solution is to put it all to rest. This was described very well, along with the true fact that suicide is not selfish. In NO WAY is it selfish, and this poem described these feelings very well.
All in all, I enjoyed it a lot! You definitely have a lot of talent, and I look forward to reading more of your pieces!
Good job!
-Space the Snickerdoodle
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