Hello Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
My interpretation:
Another depression poem, huh? Don't worry, I write a lot of those as well
Overall:
Overall, I really liked! 8/10. You need to reword some of the lines and words, but otherwise the grammar is fine and I have no suggestions. I would maybe put some line breaks between the words, but that's my personal preference. Great job and keep up the great work!
Why haven’t you given me your soul yet? --
Kara
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