I'm new to this and honestly don't know what I'm doing so I'm sorry if I say something wrong . The poem was great, it provided an amazing description with imagery. The metaphors were also well placed and the overall message was nice. I think some words and phrases could have been changed up a bit or moved to fit the poem better such as the part that says environmental impacts. Most of the word choices were great as well because of the way they impacted the poem and portrayed both your thoughts and just general ideas facts or ideas. Good job on the poem!
Points: 45
Reviews: 1
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