The 'nursery rhyme' feel of the poem makes it very fun to read! It's short but compensates with the length of each line. That is very amusing. The format in which this poem is written is definitely not usual, but art should not be limited to hard guidelines. If it sticks within the rules of grammar, write it as you please!
The story being told was intriguing, too. One is left to wonder what became of Rose and John, and what did Rose have to do with Concord that made him consent to a door...
Imagination knows no bounds.
Points: 736
Reviews: 9
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