Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
I ran and I didn't stop.The smell of smoke filled the air. The building shook as deafening explosions filled my ears,making them ring. I tripped and fell awkwardly on something, making my right leg flair up in pain. I got up, and limped towards towards the exit,coughing from the smoke and wiping dust from my face. As soon as I made it out of the apartment and into the street I collapsed, the last thing I saw was the glow of the burning building.
Hmm, well this one is very much on the short side as far as prologues are concerned but I do think this one does pack quite a bit of a punch so here I am talking about it...xD...well anyway, right off the bat, I like the way this whole paragraph appears to be in a sort of constant motion here. It just really does wonders to reflect someone that is constantly on the move as all these various things are just happening around them and that really gives this piece a wonderful flow to it that I really loved.
Now anyway getting to what this appears to be saying, it looks like perhaps a building is collapsing due to some sort of natural disaster or perhaps some kind of attack. Explosions in a collapsing building can mean a lot of things after all, and well, it certainly is a very interesting thing to pack into a prologue here, I was certainly interested to see what might have caused this, and well coupled with the title of this piece, I'm certainly quite intrigued.
Soo...in summary I'd say, this was a pretty intriguing prologue, it certainly makes me want to read on to see what this is all about and maybe learn about who this person was. Despite this being as short as it is, I feel like this really does do a pretty decent job as a prologue.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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