Hello I'm here to review your poem a little bit(:
Okay so I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors at all.
The only thing I didn't understand was the rhyme scheme. To me it just seems a little all over the place.
I truly did enjoy this poem though. it is very well written and it could actually have so many meanings. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.
have a wonderful day
>Adrian
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