Hello again Songmorning and happy holidays! I'm back for another review!
The stakes are risen! Again! (How much are you going to put these people through?) You've written this again very well. I, as always, am very excited to see what happens next. Thank you for that, by the way.
'“When asked whether or not he personally believed that Jigoku Shoujo was real, Hajime avoided the question, replying, ‘All I can say is, if you have someone you hate, don’t seek revenge. I can tell you now that it won’t do you any good.’”'
This starts to make me suspicious... I'm starting to invent conspiracy theories. I think that the reporter knows something........ (Cue mysterious music)
'The article began, “The Hell Girl, known as ‘Jigoku Shoujo’ in Japan, has recently become a popular urban myth in that country, with many young people there claiming it to be real.'
At this point I start to think about this (Thanks for that. I like thinking about the stories I'm reading.) and come to the conclusion that things are going to get waaaaaaaayyyy worse than they already are.
'And now she wants to sue me for…for what? The so-called trauma she had to endure? What about the trauma I had to endure? Has she even thought about that at all?'
Yay! You're considering the woman from part one! So she's coming into play..... How interesting. It seems that there's a whole other side to this story: Janet's side.
'The more her thoughts continued, the more enraged they became until her face looked like that of a demon filled with hatred.'
I'm pretty sure what I think is going to happen is actually going to happen.
How's this for irony. This is the quote at the bottom of the page:
'People find it far easier to forgive others for being wrong than being right.'
— Albus Dumbledore
Creepy, right?
I can't tell you how excited I am to read the rest of this! Well done again!
~Holographic Ladybug
(This brings me to my fourth star! Whoo!)
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