This was okay.
I don't like how straight forward this is. I enjoy when the poet gets right to the point, but this left no room for imagination. You dictated what we have to think about the poem and you aren't allowing any interpretation. That isn't a good thing. I do enjoy the metaphor/allusion to it being an amphitheater, but there are many other qualities about this poem that really dampens it.
thanks.
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