Hello CapitalMonday here for a review. i like to begin how people could relate since er all get migraines some point in life, and when we do this poem could relate. Also i enjoyed the many uses of adjectives in this poem to describe how your migraine felt to the reader and if they could compare yours to theirs .
When i look for a poem, i try to look for anything that would need to be change/improve but in most poems i read (like this one) or the comments from below, that i would think that you have fixed the errors in this poem.
is amazing example of adjective in this poem and i love poems that have these since they give great imagery devices for the reader to use when they read this. Also there is some few end rhymes throughout this poem (not many poem could do this well).relief, in lighting pains of booming sound
Also i would think that people could relate since we all have a horrible headache once in a while and we try everything to get rid of it but sometimes, it goes away on its own. I think this poem represents the migraine in everyone.
Farewell,
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