Young Writers Society

Hey Googlebot!

I stumbled across this poem today and wow! It's amazing!

I found literally no errors in the entire poem. After reading this, I won't be surprised if you do have an encyclopedia inside your head.

I like how you use simple yet effective to describe something that we all take for granted. No, I don't mean food, clothing, shelter etc. I mean Google.

I really like how you describe Google as having no race, religion or caste. It's a truly creative idea.

I especially loved this line:

I want to be like Google,

As open-minded as its search,

And as honest as its search history.

I can't wait to read more of your work. You have an amazing style, with wholesome humor.

Keep writing.

Hello, Googlebot-
This is so true. It is humorous. How did you ever think of it? You did this fantastically!!!

My favorite part is:
"Google has no race, it has no religion.

It celebrates every festival without any notions.

It marks you a criminal if you have committed a crime.

It marks your doodle if you’re worthy enough.

Every man can use it; no rich, no poor.

Helps you in your work without any money.

I want to be like Google,

As open-minded as its search,

And as honest as its search history."

You did so good!!! Please tell me how you thought of this. I can not do thisw. I am not good with poems.

Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets get started.

So, to start off this review, the first thing I noticed is that, well nothing! The flow was good and no grammar or spelling errors of the nature were found when read over!

So, the meaning of the poem. Well, its simple. You wish that you could be as easy minded as Google, it being a program and everything.

Overall, I liked the poem and keep up the good work! So, happy Valentines Day ! I really need to go now, Grim has souls to reap and he needs more cocoa. He has a problem, seriously. Annnd I think he brought a dinosaur to life. Great. Anyways, Cheerio and fruit loops to you!

Hi! Danni here for a review!
First off, love the “I’m feeling lucky!!!” line. That was pure genius.
Second of all, I love the idea. This is a really lovely poem. Props to you for writing it! I can’t believe it has 74 likes. That’s amazing. It deserves it! I like the way it was both meaningful and funny.
I can’t find any grammatical mistakes, so well done!
Keep up the good work and carry on writing more amazing poems like this one!
Best wishes,

Danni x

I love this because not only do you express in free verse, you also create imagery of what Google does. My favorite line I think, would be "As open-minded as its search, And as honest as its search history." Because this line says that you want to be open to new things, new topics, new ideas. And you want to be truthful, not give a lie to anyone, let everyone know everything. And that's really creative! So great job!

hi! not sure if this will be a good review but I'm doing my best! I like how simple this poem was and how you described Google. I especially like the "I'm feeling lucky" part, that made me smile. I like how you didn't make the poem take a too dark turn and kept it light, I enjoyed it very much. Very well written poem

Hi I'm Ash and I am here to review! I hope all is well. Okay I'm going to start now!

I like how you wrote this. It was funny and simple, but I found a deeper meaning.Although I would have hoped for this to be more sincere and deep, you kept it light and simple.And I praise you for that. The rhythm was pretty good, and you kept your pacing just well.

I hope to read more from you! Have a great day!

PS: "I'm feeling lucky"
That made me laugh really hard!

Hello there Googlebot!!

This is Eros here to write a review for such a beautiful piece of yours!!

The theme is unique and very very sweet!! I like how you have compared the daily life with the google. All the wishes have been described soo beautifully!! I like the idea of the discrimination done by us but not by Google.
Google is really helpful. Whatever you have said is 100% true and is really very sweet! I liked the poem. BEAUTIFUL poemmmmm!!!!!!! It was just very very very very AWESOME and GREAT and SWEET and BEAUTIFUL and *speechless*. I don't have any more words to say.

Keep writing...
Never cease...
Because we all love to keep reading such beautiful works!!
Have a great day/night!

This is amazing and I agree with what Tay01 said! You're very talented, and very creative, able to bring a piece so simple to life. I love how you made such factual things make sense, and really brought your feelings of who you want to be to light. Great job

duhh! This is too simple. Everyone can write about it, but none wants to. BECAUSE THEY ARE NOT CREATIVE LIKE YOU! Perfect work! Excellent piece! Good tone! Awesome rhythm!

Hahah..It made me laugh so hard.Especially the ending part.It reminded me the chuck norris joke with google.You are a good one mate.. Why dont you try something more serious though??I think you've got what it needs.I' d be very happy to see something newerr.Keep up the good work bro.Brofiiist...! You can check my work if you want to.I'd be very happy to know hod did you find it.Thanks!

Hahah..

Not a poem expert, but I believe you have the potential to become a very good poet, if you put a little more thought and effort into your writing process. Keep letting your creative juices flow, keep writing.

I absolutely love this. you're beautiful XD

1. HEAVY-HANDED. Check!
2. DULL AND BORING. Check!
3. CLICHED AND UNORIGINAL. Check!
4. GIMMICKY. Check!

That's all I can say! I Know some Fan-Boys are gonna attack me. BUT THIS IS A HOPELESS POEM!

I hate this 'ideal picture'.

I always thought of Google as a simple search website and nothing more. This made me see it in a whole new light, as if you've opened my eyes to the beautiful person known as Google. But, in all seriousness, this was a beautiful poem at the very least. I especially love the last line;

"After using it each time, a voice within me says,

“I’m feeling lucky!!!”

This made me laugh, that is rare if you ask me xD

Overall this was a funny, eye opening sort of poem... at least in my eyes.

My horrible joke is now out in the open xD

This is so cute... Can't say anything less!
I hope you do continue with that intention of the sequel

I love your poem. It is a very different way to think about Google. You're right; if Google was a person he would be open minded and honest. I am just slightly confused by the wording in line five, but I know what you are trying to say. This is a good and creative piece.

*applauds* well done <3

And here I thought you were a google bot.

Man, that was really cool! An ingenious poem! I never thought of Google that way! And suddenly, I too want to be like Google! But I'm left pondering; what happened to the browsers like Bing? Do they feel neglect while Google feels utter acceptance and happiness? What I'm saying is, you should definitely consider releasing a sequel.

Hey there, Googlebot!

I thought this poem was amusing and well thought out. The way you described Google as if it were a person was amazing!

However, I was a little confused by line five. I'm not saying that you should change it in any way, but if you explained it a bit to me, that would help my understanding of this poem.

No spelling or grammatical errors, I say it deserves an 8/10.


Keep up the good work!


~Swiftfur