First not to sound rude or anything but like the others have been saying, this story needs to be under poems instead of short stories. Second this story has lots of potential but it is kind of lost due to vocabulary and wording if you put a little more wording and feeling into this poem i think it would be alot better. I like how you describe the wolf being alone and how he wants to call upon to the birds for direction. Interesting poem.
Points: 354
Reviews: 8
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