Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well...this was quite a story. Very sad there to see there...but our protagonist here is dealing with this a lot better than most and its sweet to see the comfort being offered here as well...gives you a little bit of hope which is always nice.
Anyway let's get right to it,
I walked out of the house, letting the screen door slam behind me. There were no tears; only a heavy, heavy weight in my heart. I let my feet take me into the woods, following a path I had taken many times. It wasn't my fault she had died. She came down with pneumonia and there was nothing I could do. Mom had tried everything she could, every medicine there was, but with asthma, there was no saving my sister. She had been too young......too young! I reached the end of the path and sat down on the bench like I usually did when I came this way and waited.
Ooof...well we're starting things off here on quite a sad note I see. Definitely a truly terrible situation to be in...aaand so far it appears our protagonist here has managed to move past it and understand the situation which is always a good sign...now let's see what this secret is all about.
Soon the bushes rustled and an old wolf came out of the foliage, blue-gray fur sleek and well-groomed. He and I had known each other for a long, long time; almost five years now. I had named him Flight. I didn't know why, but it was just a good name. I hugged him tight around the neck, and that was when the tears came. I sobbed silently into his fur, feeling it dampen underneath my cheek.
Ohh...well wolves are quite cool here...and you can definitely see that these two here have shared quite a lot of time together by the level of trust here and then the whole crying thing as well...definitely seems like a very special wolf here.
Flight licked my tear-stained face when I broke away, washing away the sorrow and comforting me. He brushed my side with his tail, beckoning for me to follow. I did, knowing exactly where we were going. Grandfather would be there and he would comfort me.
Aww...well that seems like another wolf...comfort is a good thing to have at this time...although can't be nice having to protect a secret that you once shared with someone all alone.
As we walked through the beautiful spring forest I observed the sunlight that filtered through the thick leaves of the oaks and maples. Birds pecked at bushes and flitted from tree to tree. A rabbit hopped across my path as we walked. Eventually, we reached the place that Grandfather always was. His old branches reached out to me, pulling me toward the trunk of the old beech. I grasped the lowest, thickest branch and pulled myself up into the branches, higher and higher, not stopping until I had reached the thickest branch of that height.
Well that is some really neat description there...love the visual that you create there...definitely would be a lovely place to explore.
Flight watched from below as I settled myself into the crook of the branch. It was wide, wide enough for me to curl up in, but I just lay, belly up, gazing at the sky, feeling my remaining tears dry out in the sun. I stayed like that for hours, thinking about Arrie, how she had liked to hang from the lower branches, giggling as Flight had tried to reach her toes by leaping up, tongue extended out of his mouth. Flight and Grandfather had been our secret, but now it was only mine to keep.
Well...a little bit of reminiscing there I see...well...that's good to see....well sad to see the whole memories flooding back thinking back on with some sort of smile there is a lot better than several other things that could happen.
Flight whined, letting me know that the sun was setting, that I should be getting back. I sighed and climbed down Grandfather's branches and onto the forest floor. Flight licked me and I kissed him goodbye before heading back to my house. I would see them both tomorrow, and I knew that I would probably be heading back very often for the next few months.
I heard my secret wolf howl a goodbye as I reached my back door and knew that he was sitting by Grandfather, hoping that I would be happier when he next saw me. Well, he had a long wait ahead of him.
Well...that's a hopeful note at least somewhat there to end with...could be a lot worse here...at least we've got hope here that things can somewhat get better...although I suppose it can never quite be as good as it was...ahh..well...'tis life.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall...this was a pretty nice story...liked that ending quite a bit especially...anyway...a little sad though after this...you do a pretty good job here with the emotions. Anyway let's see what happens after this.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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