Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well..this was quite a deep story despite being as short as it is...oh wow...this is proving to be very interesting indeed...definitely about a very relatable situation too and that just makes this that much more powerful...well let's see where its all headed down below.
Anyway let's get right to it,
A little while ago, I let go of a friend. Not because they had bad qualities, or because we didn't get along well. It was because every time we talked, I felt as if a dagger was being pushed more and more into my stomach. I felt like, because of them, I couldn't be truly happy.
Oh wow...well...talk about a dramatic start...definitely doesn't get more dramatic than that one...wow...very much a terrible situation to have a friend like that...and well...seems like moving away from them seems like its probably better....although if they don't have bad qualities either...well...this is promising to be verry interesting.
When I only started feeling this way, I thought, I can't do this to them. They'll break. But now, I did. And surprisingly, they took it well. Of course, I knew the 'It's okay' wasn't real, and that it really really wasn't okay for them. But I also know, that time heals mostly everything. You get over it, even if you don't want to.
Okay...well..that's a interesting bit of wisdom there at the end of that paragraph...and strangely quite true...also okay....okay...that seems like a pretty clean break there...just everyone departs without causing too much further hurt...now lets see why this whole situation even exits...I hope its elaborate on a bit further down in the story.
So I let go. It was strange at first, because my heart was still beating like I just ran up and down a hill ten times in row. Because I was terrified. Hell, I'm still terrified.
Hmmm...letting go definitely is quite terrifying...sometimes even when its something bad for you...letting go has a way of just being hard.
But I let go. I want to scream it, I want to show myself that I actually did it. That I'm brave enough. That I'm free.
Maybe in a day or week or month, I'll start regretting it. But then, I'll remind myself that it's not a problem anymore. That there's no use in dwelling.
Okay...well...being free of what though...that really is the important thing here...hmm...well the talks of regret here definitely don't seem to be very encouraging at all here...oh dear...what has just happened...now I'm very curious at this point.
I'm free. Free from thinking how to make it better, free of worrying whether if I mean it when I say that I love them.
I can move on, from now. Or maybe not, maybe I'll sit alone in the hallways of my school. But I won't think about it. Because you shouldn't force a friendship. It should come naturally. And if it doesn't?
Okay..well...that's a bit of sad ending there...I kind of figured out exactly why this whole letting go situation happened but then not quite...somehow it still seems a little unclear to me why they had to let go of their friend....oh well...maybe I just can't see it.
Let them go.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall...this was a pretty interesting read...and I do think it makes for a good story here. Anyway...that's about all I've gotta say for today.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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