Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!!
First Impression: Well....this is quite an interesting little prologue that you've got here....that much is quite certain....there's definitely some very interesting thinks about throughout this here story...well...more details down below.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Life is full of surprises, we spend so much time planning for the present and the future in hopes to make a better and brighter outcome for ourselves. We live our lives through the lenses of ignorance day after day, never once thinking or believing that anything could go wrong. That everything in our world is perfect, flawless… huh… I have to say that we are definitely a species who have chosen to live blindly and every time we do, we suffer the consequences. I should know better than anyone, what it’s like to lose everything… to have your entire life flipped upside down without warning… to be striped of every ounce of hope, and at the same time trying to keep myself from falling off the edge. Truth is my mind, body, and soul cannot go any further… my time here has come to an end. The remembrance of me, my family and the once brightly lit home full of joy and laughter will be short lived in the hearts and minds of others and then soon everything will go back to normal. People will carry on with their lives, their jobs, etc. and the dead will be forgotten no one will blink an eye, or miss a beat before they remember the deceased.
Well...that's a very interesting paragraph there to use in that there prologue...I do really like the overall vibe and flair that it gives off though...its definitely giving us a sense of what kind of story this might be, with everything about life and death being mention...the potential of a lost family forgotten by the pov character here who is probably the protagonist and I have to say....this definitely seems interesting. This certainly is a great way to start off the prologue to a story...that much is certain. Especially that first line talking about humanity in general, some very interesting things mentioned there.
So why is it so hard, all I have to do is close my eyes… think of a happy place, then put the weapon to my head and simply let go of the trigger. I don’t understand… why am I still here? What am I waiting for? I took a deep breath slowly inhaling and exhaling, I began counting to ten when suddenly the ground beneath my feet started to quake and my beloved family portraits started falling from the walls. The ceiling above me began to quickly tremor almost on the verge of collapse. I turned around to get a good look of what was taking place outside, but before I was given the chance… death had finally took hold of me in the shape and form of massively huge waves of water crashing and tearing apart every house before it eventually, swept mine away… Do you think you could ever forgive me for killing you?
Okay...well that was a very interesting piece of information there...I mean him trying to end his own life there is severely dramatic all on its own...but then him not quite doing that, wondering why he didn't do that but then this massive waves of something sweeping everything away...it all conveys quite a story there. And well...that last line though...that's the most mysterious part of this...makes for a really cool ending there.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall this was an interesting little story here to read. Definitely does make for quite an awesome prologue here. Well anyway...that's about all I've gotta say for now.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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