hi dear
i think verse 2 is the best part of this poem because of its meaning and because i could get to the rhythm of it more than other parts.
about the first verse...i cant actually communicate with two last sentences
''I can't believe all the things that are happening
And I can't deal with the pain it's bringing''
both for the rhythm and the meaning.
and i think the worst part of this poem that is not actually connected to the verses is the chorus.it is so meaningless despite of the verses that have good meaning.
good luck
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