Hey, yo, Chips Ahoy McCoy! Strangelove here on this PokeReview Day and I have a quick review for you!
If I am one person to say, you do enjoy avant-garde poetry. Well, not avant-garde but it sure is odd. You often rely on a couple of words and a simple punchline. There was no punchline in this, so it's nice to switch some things up. Let me get onto the good stuff first.
You rely on change, which I like. You manage to keep it something we can relate to and it's simple. We all want change, and change would be good for some reason. This is also short, which is a knack you seem to have most of the time.
I didn't really get the jist of it. It seems like it had potential, but just wasn't there. I'm sorry, but this wasn't really there for me.
Good job,
Keep writing,
Stay groovy, my friend.
#TeamPlasmaStruck
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