Hey, EmeraldEyes, Happy Ultimate Pokemon Awesomeness Team Plasma For The Win Review Day! About time, my friend.
So first, in the first line, "ok" should be "OK", or "okay" if you prefer.
"Katy would like to tell you that Katy is not ok."
All the rest was fine. Proofread, revise, edit, and be awesome. The most I can tell you is I he you are on Plasma, not Aqua. Or Rocket. Just Plasma. Please, we need all the help we can get. You, my friend, is help.
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