I like the general idea of this essay but I think it needs to be more smooth. You should elaborate on the idea a bit more and have more transition words. I advice you put something in this poem like 2 plus 2 is 5, to me now. Of course, you should phrase that better but you get my point. I think also you should have more better grammar(but I can't say that I have great grammar). Overall, I love the poem, I can really relate to this poem. I am terrible at grammar and I love math.
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