Hey emy! Puppy's here for another review. Ok this might be a little shorter for 2 reasons 1) I'm on my iPod lol and 2) it's super hard to type on the iPod. GRR!!! Ok anywho the others pointed out pretty much everything to nitpick at. I want to answer the question myself like willow did if u don't mind me doing so. I think no matter what that truth is better. Sure I lied a few times in my life but who hasn't? I was young and find and didn't know right from wrong, but now that I do, it's all truth for me. I really liked this poem but again with willow I would like to see it split up a little bit. Who knows maybe it would run smoother. Ok that's all I have for now ( hopefully it's long enough for a review XD) keep it up, and I will be back when I'm not grounded from the computer anymore.
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