Hey, Weymouth here for a review of this
I like how this poem starts off with a couple of questions, but i'm not sure the second line is correct, shouldn't it be "Do I even have the right?" I may be wrong, but im fairly confident of that.
I did also like "creating responses that they would never want to hear" as it kinda sums up the miscommunication and isolation issues to do with between teenagers/adolescents and parents.
Another thing I liked is the "I just want to be happy" stanza, it gives a feel of a certain longing or loneliness maybe (I dunno, I'm probably really, really misconstrued but that's just my opinion).
I think that this whole piece is full of good life advice and just good quotes to live by, for example "productivity does not equal happiness" I just love that, because it really doesn't half the time, you need to be productive doing something you love in order to be happy. Even though this seems like a rather negative poem, it actually is rather inspiring to me.
All in all, a great piece of writing Keep it up!
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