Wow.... this almost made me cry! this was so awesome I cant stand it. the title is a little.... odd, but its what you wanted it to be so I'm just going to live with it. I didn't notice any grammer or spelling errors. I thought it had a lot of detail in it. I also loved how you added 'and I preyed to God'. its hard to find someone out there who will even mention God in their stories. Over all, I really liked this poem!!!!! Great job!!!
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