Hey there! Great concept you've got here. I love your metaphors and imagery in this poem a lot. I was just wondering, first off, why it's in the articles/essay section? Was that an accident?
If I were to have any criticism of this, I wasn't sure how well all the lines flowed together. They did seem to have similar themes, but at times the point of each and the point of them altogether was unclear.
In all though, great start! Keep up the good work!
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