heyyy
so that's not your first poem i read , and like the others it is quite true and full of emotions and kind of deep .
i liked the structure and the organization of your poem , also the expression "It was November of '12." then "It was december of '12." and so on ....it add a special cute touch to your poem .

''when it was that you
asked me something that
would change my life forever. ''
this part didn't flow in a good way , maybe it's because of the word "that"
i always focus on imagery in my reviews cause for me it makes the poem so attractive even if it has a simple idea /theme ...so i suggest to add imagery .

"But you said I shouldn't feel guilty.
But I felt guilty anyway.

I still had felt guilty,
as I had to do it over
Facebook instead face to face. "
i don't know if these are separated parts buti didn't like the repeatition of "guilty".
but i liked how you finished the poem it was soo strong and catchy.

in general

you got TALENT and i really like your works , so keep writing
can't wait to read more

Hello, Ana with a review!

I love this poem. It describes the feelings that I think many teens and young adults have, both about moving and losing a special someone. I can almost feel what you're going through by the poem. I like how you keep returning to the month and year. It's a unifying element that ties the whole thing together well. I don't have any improvements, and the grammar and spelling are good.

Keep it coming!

Hi hopeless03 here to give a review!!

I would just like to say that this is a wonderful poem! You are an amazing writer and you have a gift. I don't see andy thing to correct on it and I would like to say that this has great grammar and punctuation. The format is good and so is your spelling! Bravo to you for that! This has made it into the top ten great poems so again bravo! One and please give me some background info..

Keep writing and stay beautiful!!

~hopeless03

Background info please.