" how anyone could cut
their beautiful wrists. "
- I like how you made it seem beautiful. It's different, but cool. Most people who cut can read this and notice something that not many think is beautiful, but you made it beautiful by writing about it.
" Pale smooth skin,
faint blue and green veins
branch up my wrists like snakes "
- I also like how you compared the veins to snakes. Good job.
Nice poem and details. Hope to keep reading your poems/stories.
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