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How can I feel so alive while everyone else is sleeping? Our bodies are like machines—programmed to wake with the sun and sleep with the moon. But somehow the clock inside me is reversed and the moon becomes my sun.
I just sat there in my dark room staring up at the ceiling trying to find a way to fall asleep, but all I ended up doing was watching to time change on my clock. Every night I was so unexplainably restless. How romantic would it have been if I was some talented artist or poet—suffering through the day to come alive with creative energy from the moonlight?
Well, that's an interesting point to start with there....it sounds like someone who's got some form of sleeping disorder perhaps and therefore can't go to sleep although the talk of how their sleep cycle is somehow reversed as compared to most people does suggest there's perhaps more to this than what it appears to be at first glance...I'm almost getting some sort of vampire vibes here, especially with the title that we have for this piece.
But I was a cursedly horrible artist and writer even at three o’clock in the morning. I’ve tried it. Still, I have this aching feeling inside me that I’m supposed to be doing something other than watching the minutes fly by.
I could always take the boring logical route and say I have insomnia or some other sleep disorder, but I know I don’t.
Well, the whole being a horrible artist at midnight despite the cliche of people doing fantastic art and poetry in the moonlight and such is a lovely relatable piece there...to give us a glimpse at what sort of personality this person has here. But well, it looks like my suspicions could be right there, if that last bit about how the boring logical route of this being a sleep disorder is not actually what's going on for this person.
I’m not tired right now; my body doesn’t crave sleep like it should. There’s so many things I should be doing…I should be sleeping…I should be studying for school…And according to my mom, I should be listening to her.
But I can’t, for what is there to do when you live in the middle of nowhere with your mind in a galaxy far away from everyone else’s. What do you do when there is nothing to do?
You run away.
Well that ending was certainly not quite what I was expecting to run into there...but well, I would say that I'm not disappointed there with what's actually revealed at the end cause we've got ourselves a pretty vague sounding and rather mysterious couple of points to end on here. It certainly seems to hint at some pretty exciting things happening...and it definitely makes you want to find out more here. Overall, a pretty solid piece this one.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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