Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
It was a dark, rainy night when it happened. The human child died and in her place was a fledgling girl. She was held by the human mother and started anew. This is not your typical fairy tale; this is a story of life and death, real and unreal, truth and lie, and above all, The Three Dimensions. I don't understand it all yet but this is what I do know and can tell you. I am Diana Jane. Welcome to the modern Faerie Land.
Well as far as prologues go, that one doesn't quite read like one here...this almost sound half like a blurb, but I think this is really more suited to be something along the lines of a first paragraph to a first chapter there, with the whole vibe that it appears to be shooting for and the nice bit of shock value we have here that really does get your attention quite well here.
At any rate, moving onto to talking about said shocking start here, I love how casually that you've just straight up mentioned the fact that a human child just straight up died and got replaced by this other person. The fact that there's barely anytime to process it before the opening is moving on into other things makes it just that much more powerful and that really is a lovely way to star things off there.
All the talk of dimensions and of course the whole death and life serves just the icing on the cake there to all of that. You get the sense that there's a complex world behind all of this and that adds a lovely touch there to make you want to dive into this world and figure out what's going on in this world to make things be the way that they currently are here. At any rate, it seems like a story that I would read here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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