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Sun Dec 04, 2011 10:21 pm
Roach says...



FREE ROACHES REVIEWS


Addy here.


WILL REVIEW:
» romantic fiction
» science fiction
» dark fiction
» action and adventure fiction
» art and photography
» fantasy fiction
» general fiction
» poetry (um, possibly)

IF YOU BEG AND GIVE ME ROACHES AND TEA:
» fan fiction
» historical fiction

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» Ratings don't bother me; I hardly ever even look at them

» I will not review mammoth pieces unless it's a special shmeal

» Only request one review at a time, please; as soon as that review is done and filed, then you may feel free to request another one

» Please include a link to your story and the title of it when requesting


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That's all.


- Addy
"There was John and Jane and Betsy
eating bugs and drinking Pepsi,
dancing jigs up on the fiddle,
up the sides and down the middle."
- Erland & The Carnival

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Mon Dec 05, 2011 2:00 am
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Jas says...



Hi!

This is part of a general fiction novel but I'd like you to review it based on the writing style and imagery and stuff, ignore plot and characters and conflict and all that. I do hope that made sense. :]

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Thanks!

~Jas
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Mon Dec 05, 2011 4:24 am
Roach says...



Spiffy! - it's finished. Wonderful story.
"There was John and Jane and Betsy
eating bugs and drinking Pepsi,
dancing jigs up on the fiddle,
up the sides and down the middle."
- Erland & The Carnival

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Sat Dec 10, 2011 10:24 am
mikepyro says...



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My Father Was Buried is the title.
Short story. Hope you enjoy it!

Review based on whatever you like




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Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:00 am
BerlynnRae says...



Would you mind reviewing my novella? Ghost of Theater Two?
Prolouge:
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Chapter one:
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I haven't had time to post the next chapters yet. Thanks so much! ~Berlynn Rae




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Fri Dec 16, 2011 2:25 pm
AmiiLightwood says...



PLease could you review this one for me?

Mitchell
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Thanks!!
~ Amy
'You've gotta sing sometimes, like you don't need the money,
Love sometimes, like you'll never get hurt,
You've got to dance, dance, dance, like there's nobody watching,
It's gotta come from the heart if you want it to work.'
Adam Brand, Come From The Heart







Perfection is lots of little things done well.
— Marco Pierre White