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Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:17 pm
AquaMarine says...



Hello there.

I'm pretty happy to review anything you throw at me, but just in case you're worried here's a break-down.

I'll give you a cookie for this:

General Fiction Short Stories
Fantasy Short Stories
Sci-Fi Short Stories
Action/Adventure Short Stories
Historical Fiction Short Stories
Dramatic Poetry
Lyric Poetry
Other Poetry
Chapter One of novels

Maybe just share my cookie with you:

Romantic Short Stories
Narrative Poetry
Non-Fiction
Art and Photography

No cookie for you:

Fanfiction of any kind
Novel chapters upwards of 2 when I haven't reviewed the previous ones (unless you provide an outline!)
Pieces of work that have already received a gazillion in-depth reviews.

Kthxbai, I love you.

Art and Photography
Last edited by AquaMarine on Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:00 pm
BenFranks says...



I'm requesting three... REBEL.

A Needle in the Haystack: topic75330.html
Painfull Admittance: topic74728.html
Simple Reasoning: topic75332.html

Merci beaucoup :D
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:48 pm
Button says...



If you have some time, I'd really appreciate a review on this poem: topic75208.html

Děkuju moc! :)

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Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:59 pm
AquaMarine says...



Perse, I've finished yours, sorry I couldn't be more helpful! One of yours is done, Benji, but I'll get to the others soon.
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:50 am
Roal says...



Hey Aqua :D
Can you review [part 1] of my short story?
post812595.html#p812595
Thanks.
14 years have passed
And yet I'm unabled
To find a friend
For my existence is lower
Than a piece of grass.
  





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Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:49 pm
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I'll finish everything up tomorrow! Had an inordinate amount of art work due today, and it turns out I'd done about half of it. :wink:
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 11:30 am
AquaMarine says...



Finished Roal and Ben.

Now, it's Review Sunday, so does anyone have any requests? :)
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:24 pm
Elinor says...



Could you review this for me, please?

topic72967.html

If you want to review the second chapter as well when you're done, go ahead, but I'm only asking you do this one for now. :)

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Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:58 pm
AquaMarine says...



Done, El! Hope I helped. :)
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Mon Jan 31, 2011 1:46 am
Lethero says...



topic75633.html I need this reviewed. It's an essay for Advanced Composition. If you can get it done in the next 24 hours, you'll be big help. Thank you.
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Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:58 am
AquaMarine says...



Done, Leth! Hope I helped.
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Mon Jan 31, 2011 5:55 pm
Button says...



Hi there... again. :)
That song is stuck in my head again, and I was wondering if you could please take a look at this when you have the time: topic75547.html

It would be greatly appreciate. :)

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Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:04 am
cannoncomplex says...



hi there, aquamarine, can you do a review for me. It's a bit long but its for a YWS contest.
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Sun May 08, 2011 5:00 am
snoopysoap says...



hey there! i know i'm a terrible writter and all (jks XD) can you review these for me please? *batters eyelids* and if you want to review other chaptes go for gold mate!
topic60721.html
topic76404.html

cheers
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Sun May 08, 2011 6:06 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Hey! I wrote two poems recently. They are both pretty short so they shouldn't take up a lot of time! If you could review them it would be great!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80590
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80591

I want that cookie >=p

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