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Tue Dec 28, 2010 9:46 pm
Wolf says...



My goal is to do at least 2 reviews per day, and I thought you guys could help me out. ;)

What I will review:
• Fantasy short stories (my favourite)
• Romance short stories
• Non-Fiction
• Historical Fiction short stories
• Action/Adventure short stories
• Fantasy novels *
• Any novel in the genres specified above
• 'Other' fiction
• Art & Photography
• NanoWrimo
• Any genre of poetry (it's not my strong suit, but I'll try my best)
* = This guarantees that I will review the first 3 chapters of the novel.

About my Reviews:
I generally start my critiques with nit-picks/grammar, followed by some general comments (what I did & didn't like, areas for improvement, etc) and then my overall opinions on the piece. However, if you want a specific review (for example, you want me to pay special attention to grammar or character development), I can do that too.

Rules:
1. You can submit a maximum of 2 pieces per day.
2. If you want a critique on a specific thing (see above), you must tell me in your post.
3. Please post the title & genre of your piece, along with the link.
4. I'm fine with reviewing things with ratings. I can deal with "mature subject matter" and language, but I would really, really rather not critique something if it has a lot of gore in it (makes me faint - yes I know, it's embarrassing).

And that's it! I don't ask for anything in return - I mean, I wouldn't object to some reviews on my novel of course, but it is in no way required.

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I'm ready to start reviewing! :D
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:23 pm
HIGHWHITESOCKS says...



You really helped me out with Trouble on the Homefront, and I'd appreciate it if you could review my short story "The Unnoticed." Browse on over to my profile and look for it, shouldn't be too hard to find. Thanks!
- SOCKS
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Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:26 pm
HIGHWHITESOCKS says...



Oh, whoops! Here's the link, and the genre is general fiction. thanks again!
viewtopic.php?t=73880
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Wed Dec 29, 2010 1:02 am
Wolf says...



Reviewed! :)

That's only one done so far today - I need at least one more!
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:41 am
HIGHWHITESOCKS says...



Well, you could take a look at another chapter one of one of my books, I'd being very grateful! haha
viewtopic.php?t=73907

- SOCKS
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:59 pm
Wolf says...



Up next:
topic73681.html [by psudiname]
viewtopic.php?t=73907 [by HIGHWHITESOCKS]

I'll for sure do these tomorrow as soon as I wake up. :)
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Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:52 am
Azila says...



Hullo Camille!

Would you mind ripping this story to pieces for me? It's for Skins's contest and I want all the brutal opinions I can get. ^.^

Thankee muchly!
  





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Sun Jan 02, 2011 11:30 pm
Wolf says...



Azila - just finished it. Took priority because it's for a contest.

Next up: psudiname's piece!
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became everything i lost.


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Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:05 am
LadySpark says...



would you please review a new novel of mine?
It's called The Magi

novel.php?id=976

thanks :),
*huggles*
Pointe
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


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Mon Jan 03, 2011 12:36 am
Wolf says...



Finished psudiname's piece. :)

Next:
• HIGHWHITESOCKS' piece
• pointe2drama's piece
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Tue Jan 04, 2011 3:47 am
ErBear says...



And.. if you can manage to squeeze this review in... I would be very thankful!

viewtopic.php?t=73950
~formerly Ilovebubbles123

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three words
for you.
Ooh, I love you.

There's only one way
to say
those three words
that's what I'll do.
Ooh, I love you. "

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Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:04 pm
Lumi says...



I'll give you cookies! 8D
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:35 pm
Wolf says...



Sorry I haven't been on much! I had a cold all week & spent most of my time sleeping. But now it's back to business!

Next up: Ilovebubbles123's piece, followed by Lumi's. :)
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Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:17 pm
Milaita says...



Mind reviewing my piece?

post831369.html

Rip it to shreds, if you please.
“There is a tide in the affairs of men, Which taken at the flood, leads on to fortune. Omitted, all the voyage of their life is bound in shallows and in miseries. On such a full sea are we now afloat. And we must take the current when it serves, or lose our ventures.”- William Shakespeare
  





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Sat Mar 12, 2011 12:48 am
rayhutch5 says...



Hi! :) I would love it if you could review the first chapter (split into two parts) of my novel. It's called "Anything But Normal". Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1206 Be brutally honest!

Thanks so much! :) -Rachael
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