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Fri Jun 04, 2010 4:11 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



Hi there! My previous Will Review for Food Thread kind of died when I had to take my school-related break from YWS, but now that I'm back, it's open again, and I'm free to review all I like-- and I will. :D

Most of my reviews are around 400-500 words in length and focus on things like characterization, plot, worldbuilding and narrative voice (especially characterization--I love me some characters); with maybe a bit about imagery, pacing, and structure if I notice something exceptional about them. Also, grammar and usage are areas of expertise for me, so if you're worried about proofreading things like that, I'm your girl. :smt001

My specialty is fantasy, but I'm willing to review any kind of prose piece. I love to read anything you've got, and I'm totally willing. I'm especially up for reading novels-- I find it much easier to talk about the content of a piece once I've really gotten to know the characters and the plot. I'm all for short stories, too though-- really, as far as prose stuff goes, I'm not picky.

I'm also open to stopping by art pieces! I'm not an expert by any means, but I took four years of art in school and I love looking at and talking about it. :smt001

Poetry and lyrics, on the other hand, I'd really prefer not to review. ^^; Sorry, I really do like reading poetry, but I have no idea how it works. You can ask me to review, I don't mind, but keep in mind that whatever critique I leave might be kind of shallow and lame. XDD

My reviews are totally free-- I just want to become more a part of the community on YWS, but I'm shy and I figure this will force me out of my reviewing shell. XD Of course, if you want to visit my portfolio and leave a review on something, I won't say no. :wink: But a lot of it is lame and old anyway, you probably won't have much fun reading it. XDD

So ask away! Your wish is my command.
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Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:54 pm
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Mind reviewing the second chapter of my novel? You already reviewed the first two parts. Here's the link. Thanks! :)
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Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:41 pm
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



Absolutely! I really liked your first two parts, and I'll get on the second chapter ASAP!
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Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:00 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



Hey there! I've got a fantasy novel on my hands that needs reviewing. Will you review it for me? How I hope you don't mind that it's a bit on the long side...

~Danie

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Mon Jun 07, 2010 9:38 pm
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Sure, I'll get to the first chapter as soon as I can. ^_^ I don't mind long stories-- In fact, I like them, it's a lot easier for me to give comments with real depth once I'm a few chapters in and have gotten to know the characters, there's a lot more meat for me to work with, as it were. :D
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Tue Jun 08, 2010 2:27 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



The review for The Ringbearers Ch. 2 is up. ^_^
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Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:07 am
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The review for Luna Ch. 1 is up, later chapters to come~. ^_^
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Thu Jun 17, 2010 6:01 am
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



All reviews for the chapters of Luna currently posted are up, and I'll keep on following it whenever new ones are posted. Thanks, angel!
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Thu Jun 17, 2010 11:03 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi there Zan. I would love a review for a novel of mine, as you said you like to read long portions.
So the link for it is down in my signaure where you'll find all the chapters. I hope you enjoy reading it as much I ejoyed writitng it.

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Thu Jun 17, 2010 4:52 pm
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Sure, no problem! I'll get started on it ASAP. :D
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Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:52 am
Attolia says...



Heyyy. Chapter four is up! love it if you could give another review, and thanks so much for all your help so far :D

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Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:30 pm
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



All done with chapter four of Attolia's story, the last two chapters of A Criminal's Heart are coming right up! : )
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:44 pm
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Um...*looks around nevrously.* When you have the time, can you review this?

The Chaos (Chapter one)- topic66140.html
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Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:45 pm
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Sure! I'll be glad to. I'll get right on it as soon as I can. ^_^
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Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:35 pm
MasterofChaos says...



Thank you so much for reviewing my first chapter!

Now, I'm sorry if this is asking too much, but can you review chapter two?
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