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Haiku Train



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Points: 41664
Reviews: 542
Fri Mar 10, 2023 7:19 am
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Liminality says...



High above the ground
earthworm dangles on cliffside --
it is fast asleep.
she/her

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35 Reviews


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Sat Mar 11, 2023 4:22 pm
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Kelisot says...



Your dreams in a cage
Your wings clipped from the Hunter
Only the darkness
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Sun Mar 12, 2023 3:11 pm
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Plume says...



Only the darkness
can decide when the light comes;
I long for their love.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Mon Mar 13, 2023 9:17 pm
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Hijinks says...



I long for their love:
eyelashes tangled in mine,
irises touching.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Tue Mar 14, 2023 9:06 am
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Liminality says...



Irises touching,
sun haloes and the rain drops
while adrift at sea.
she/her

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Mon Mar 20, 2023 3:33 pm
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Kelisot says...



While adrift at sea,
The Kraken awaits for you,
Waiting to drown souls
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Tue Mar 21, 2023 4:39 am
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fatherfig says...



waiting to drown souls
the flower nightshade is poured
over by moonlight
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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542 Reviews


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Fri Mar 31, 2023 5:49 am
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Liminality says...



Over by moonlight,
the song of that lone cricket --
it sleeps so early.
she/her

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Wed May 03, 2023 5:25 pm
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alliyah says...



the sun sleeps early;
Tomorrow's lullaby hums
songs that sound hopeful
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu May 04, 2023 9:00 am
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Buranko says...



Songs that sound hopeful
shatter the darkest corners,
giggles and laughters
  





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Thu May 04, 2023 2:40 pm
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momonster says...



giggles and laughters
house on a hill full of love
home is where joy thrives
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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35 Reviews


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Reviews: 35
Thu May 04, 2023 3:16 pm
Kelisot says...



Home is where joy thrives
But when anger seeps through love
Home is where Hell comes
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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542 Reviews


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Reviews: 542
Fri May 05, 2023 6:25 am
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Liminality says...



Home is where Hell comes,
at the end of the day, when
the orange sun sets.
she/her

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Fri May 19, 2023 2:59 am
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alliyah says...



the orange sun sets
down her cup of tea and yawns,
not fully awake.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri May 19, 2023 7:03 am
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Liminality says...



Not fully awake,
the black-feathered bird shuffles
along the thin branch.
she/her

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— Kurt Cobain