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Haiku Train



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Sun Jan 08, 2023 9:28 am
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alliyah says...



forming a river,
my home and my heart become
sunken sea-vessels
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Jan 08, 2023 9:32 am
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Liminality says...



Sunken sea-vessels --
the ocean groans when a shark
is swimming through them.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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Sun Jan 08, 2023 4:48 pm
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Hijinks says...



i'm swimming through them.
i am waterlogged with life.
i shake my ears out.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Wed Jan 11, 2023 2:53 am
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Liminality says...



I shake my ears out,
rain beats hard on the pavement
another drenched dog.
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Wed Jan 11, 2023 2:42 pm
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Kelisot says...



Another drenched dog,
I cannot help but smile big
While I wash the dog
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Wed Jan 11, 2023 2:45 pm
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Liminality says...



While I wash the dog,
a shrill whistle startles us --
on the tree, a bird.
she/her

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Wed Jan 11, 2023 2:59 pm
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creaturefeature says...



on the tree, a bird
perches, longing for the sky;
what a homesickness.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Wed Jan 11, 2023 3:15 pm
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Kelisot says...



What a homesickness
Drifting into endless seas
With no small land seen
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Thu Jan 12, 2023 12:03 am
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Liminality says...



With no small land seen,
penguins swim endlessly through
Antarctic waters.
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Sat Jan 14, 2023 12:21 am
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Hijinks says...



antarctic waters
or just the bus on the way
home? hard to tell. brrrr.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sat Jan 14, 2023 12:26 am
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Liminality says...



Home? Hard to tell. Brrrr.
Bird's nest trembles in the wind,
perched on highest branch.
she/her

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Wed Feb 01, 2023 10:06 pm
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Corvid says...



Perched on highest branch
Y’know, the branch overhead
With the nest on it
"yeet"
- albert einstein
  





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Wed Feb 15, 2023 9:57 pm
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Liminality says...



With the nest on it
tree branch sways in the west wind,
leaves rustle loudly.
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Wed Feb 15, 2023 11:19 pm
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Plume says...



Leaves rustle loudly
two eyes watch from the bushes
Boo! Did I scare you?
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 12:16 am
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Valkyria says...



Boo! Did I scare you?
A Cheshire grin, above;
your dreams in a cage
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  








If all pulled in one direction, the world would keel over.
— Yiddish proverb