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Mon Jun 27, 2022 7:58 am
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Liminality says...



Drip-drop - ocean waves
disrupted by fall of rain,
droplets turn to sheets.
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Mon Jun 27, 2022 9:48 am
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Starve says...



droplets turn to sheets
the tea is not that hot now
sips turn into swigs
  





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Mon Jun 27, 2022 9:15 pm
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Moonglade says...



Sips turn into swigs -
Moonlight curdles like old choose
Sprinkled as if stardust
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Tue Jun 28, 2022 12:30 am
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Kelisot says...



Drip-drop, ocean waves
Let the silent bass shake you
Dancing with the beat
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Tue Jun 28, 2022 1:03 pm
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Buranko says...



dancing with the beat
of a starlit sky; time stopped
hearts halted, to watch.
  





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Tue Jun 28, 2022 7:27 pm
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Moonglade says...



Hearts halted to watch
The twirling and swirling pond
Of the starry night
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Tue Jun 28, 2022 7:33 pm
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shatteredstones says...



in the starry night
old owls know little noise but
young mice make ruckus
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Tue Jun 28, 2022 7:47 pm
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Moonglade says...



Young mice make ruckus
To the night sounds of crickets
And babbling brooks
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Tue Jun 28, 2022 10:21 pm
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Kelisot says...



And babbling brooks
The howling of trees and winds
Symphonic forests
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Wed Jun 29, 2022 3:31 am
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Moonglade says...



Symphonic forests
Sway and sigh in the starlight
Glittering so bright
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Wed Jun 29, 2022 11:46 am
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Kelisot says...



Glittering so bright
Nacreous puddles of rain
Rainbow in the rain
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Wed Jun 29, 2022 4:29 pm
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Buranko says...



Rainbow in the rain
And letters in a book. I
Have flown on paper
  





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Wed Jun 29, 2022 11:26 pm
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Kelisot says...



Have flown on paper
Imagination leaks out
Letters glide across
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Wed Jun 29, 2022 11:31 pm
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shatteredstones says...



letters glide across
the backs of my aching hands
still I am not done
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Thu Jun 30, 2022 6:15 pm
Kelisot says...



Still I am not done
One last task for me to do,
Before I come home
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