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Wed May 25, 2022 11:21 am
Kelisot says...



Water to blood clots
Bursting a sanguine river
Water that ran dry
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Wed May 25, 2022 11:44 am
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Moonglade says...



Water that ran dry
Like a fox out of a river
Glittered on the plants
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Wed May 25, 2022 12:07 pm
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Kelisot says...



Glittered on the plants
Are the white fallen sinew-snow
Ashes of the slain
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Wed May 25, 2022 1:16 pm
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Moonglade says...



(Interesting metaphor!)

ashes of the slain
locked up and thrown away in
to old school lockers
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Wed May 25, 2022 1:46 pm
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clarevelyn13 says...



two old school lockers
side by side and down the hall
makes for two best friends
  





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Wed May 25, 2022 2:07 pm
Kelisot says...



makes for two best friends
with magical fairydust
today is the best
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Wed May 25, 2022 3:44 pm
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Moonglade says...



"Today is my best,"
says the flood of written words
as it chases love.
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Wed May 25, 2022 4:02 pm
Kelisot says...



as it chases love
god commands death to our love
we are in danger
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Wed May 25, 2022 4:31 pm
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Moonglade says...



We are in danger
Like kids chased by packs of cards
As if gambling calls
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Wed May 25, 2022 5:28 pm
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Valkyria says...



As if gambling calls
I give a sinful smile.
Open the first hand
Don't just exist; live

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Thu May 26, 2022 2:18 am
Kelisot says...



Open the first hand
A red king and a black ace
It is a blackjack
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Thu May 26, 2022 3:35 am
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Moonglade says...



It is a black jack,
Jack knife to the stomach, oh,
Those hard heavy blues
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Thu May 26, 2022 3:46 am
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clarevelyn13 says...



Those hard heavy blues
Crash into me as ocean waves.
Cut right to the core.
  





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Thu May 26, 2022 3:48 am
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Liminality says...



Cut right to the core,
plump crow, with the strong black beak
on shiny apples.
  





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Thu May 26, 2022 3:57 am
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Moonglade says...



Of shiny apples
That have slid across my hand
And fell to grass dew
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