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Sun May 22, 2022 8:53 pm
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Starve says...



falls forward and spills
all of dusk's fading grief in-
to a sea awe-ringed.

Spoiler! :
orange sorta rhymes with awe-ringed, right?
  





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Mon May 23, 2022 3:10 am
Kelisot says...



to a sea awe-ringed
i hold your fleece-covered hand
touch and love my body

Spoiler! :
No sexual innuendos or overtones here, but sorry if it sounds like it. I have no intention of making it sound "dirty".
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Mon May 23, 2022 3:22 am
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Moonglade says...



(Hm... now I have to use that last line as well... hm...)

Touch and love my body;
Our breath shivers like starlight's
Glittering fires
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Mon May 23, 2022 7:25 am
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Liminality says...



Glittering fires,
a cold night in the valley
by the rushing stream.
  





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Mon May 23, 2022 8:41 am
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Moonglade says...



By the rushing stream
Swallows yawn and loudly sigh
Like old stars resting
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Mon May 23, 2022 11:22 am
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Kelisot says...



Like old stars resting
Then bursting with a great BOOM
A supernova
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Mon May 23, 2022 12:53 pm
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Moonglade says...



a supernova
shatters into a million
shards of starry skies
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Mon May 23, 2022 2:12 pm
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Starve says...



shards of starry skies
shards to scarry ties of wood
please don't kill the tree!
  





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Mon May 23, 2022 3:10 pm
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Moonglade says...



Please don't kill the tree
Not many are left, please don't;
Remember the birds
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Mon May 23, 2022 5:34 pm
Kelisot says...



Remember the birds
Who soars with majestic wings
The guard of the sky
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Mon May 23, 2022 5:38 pm
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Moonglade says...



The guard of the sky
Lifts whispers and shields and spears
To battle storm clouds
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Mon May 23, 2022 6:52 pm
Kelisot says...



To battle storm clouds
Bring a sunny sword and shield
And fight through your way!
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Mon May 23, 2022 7:23 pm
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Valkyria says...



And fight through your way;
the broken memories of
the past burden you
Don't just exist; live

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Mon May 23, 2022 8:47 pm
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lliyah says...



the past burdens you.
i see when your shoulders hunch
again; you're weighed down
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Mon May 23, 2022 11:21 pm
Kelisot says...



again you're weighed down
the scale of justice has answered
you are a sinner
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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