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Haiku Train



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Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sat May 14, 2022 1:02 am
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Kelisot says...



down, down, down your spine
ethereal sounds echo
just listen to me
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Sat May 14, 2022 4:55 pm
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NewHope says...



Just listen to me;
Clouds float through forests and pour
Dripping drops of dust
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Sun May 15, 2022 12:39 am
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Hijinks says...



drops of dust fold in
between my knuckle-creases,
evidence of time.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sun May 15, 2022 12:59 am
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creaturefeature says...



evidence of time,
the furrows left on my palms;
they all have meaning.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Sun May 15, 2022 7:00 am
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NewHope says...



They all have meaning;
Words flutter around my head,
Where will I begin?
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Sun May 15, 2022 8:02 pm
Kelisot says...



Where will I begin?
Time has betrayed me again,
Nihility waits.
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Mon May 16, 2022 3:48 am
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NewHope says...



Nihility awaits
As I stutter forward with
Sword raised in calm air
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Mon May 16, 2022 11:37 am
Kelisot says...



Sword raised in calm air
The blade moving gracefully
My great Majesty
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Tue May 17, 2022 3:09 am
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NewHope says...



My great Majesty
Like a fat raindrop; plip-plop
Lathering the plants
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Tue May 17, 2022 6:41 am
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Liminality says...



Lathering the plants,
sea foam, as they lie disposed
on the shore, low-tide.
she/her

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Tue May 17, 2022 7:23 am
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NewHope says...



On the shore, low tide
As the Sun burns brightly
And seagulls squawk
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Tue May 17, 2022 10:31 am
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Liminality says...



And seagulls squawk
from over the horizon --
a cloud drifting past.
she/her

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Tue May 17, 2022 1:32 pm
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Kelisot says...



a cloud drifting past
calls a memory afar
my youthful old times.
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Wed May 18, 2022 3:16 am
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NewHope says...



My youthful old times
A stark reminder of lost
Sharp-ringed gazing love
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Wed May 18, 2022 12:04 pm
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Kelisot says...



Sharp-ringed gazing love
Pierces my heart and my soul
Let the forest burn
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  








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