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Tue Mar 30, 2021 2:07 pm
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Valkyria says...



they give oxygen
to the poor souls who cannot
swim underwater
Don't just exist; live

-Unknown
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 3:37 am
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Liminality says...



Swim underwater,
where the grasses dance swaying,
cool and emerald.
    Here for the in-betweens and the left-behinds, the unconsidered,
    the out-of-this-world.

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Wed Mar 31, 2021 3:41 am
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ShadowVyper says...



cool and emerald,
the glint of a fish's scales
in shimmering sun
I dare you to replace everything in your signature with fish puns - Omni

Any fin is possible, just don’t trout yourself!
We should dolphinitely scale back on the fish puns.
Oh for Cods hake, not another fish pun.
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 5:29 pm
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Yoshikrab says...



in shimmering sun
snowflakes shine brighter than all
but melt so quickly
When life brings you down, don't care at all, because the last thing you want is life being smug over it's victory against you.


-yoshi

[they/them]

certified wierdo

certified yoshi
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 5:39 pm
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illy7896 says...



Melting so quickly
Our loves ribboned facade
I untie the knot
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 9:12 pm
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ShadowVyper says...



i untie the knot
and pour our "love" on the ground;
a youthful mistake
I dare you to replace everything in your signature with fish puns - Omni

Any fin is possible, just don’t trout yourself!
We should dolphinitely scale back on the fish puns.
Oh for Cods hake, not another fish pun.
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 10:02 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



youthful mistakes: don't
make unempty promises
if they can't be filled.
The best thing to hold onto in life is each other.

Audrey Hepburn
  





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Thu Apr 01, 2021 8:52 am
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illy7896 says...



If they can't be filled
Empty cups sit in the sun
Rolling in the mud
  





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Thu Apr 29, 2021 1:53 am
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Liminality says...



Rolling in the mud
tiny broken skipping stones,
tossed by a tail-swipe.
    Here for the in-betweens and the left-behinds, the unconsidered,
    the out-of-this-world.

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  • I spend a sizeable chunk of my time in Poem a Week and the Worst Poem thread.
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Thu Apr 29, 2021 1:59 am
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queenshadowgem says...



tossed by tales of spite,
carbon dyoxide enters
greedy trees domain
Respect is a valued commodity with high demand and low quantity, so build yourself a fortune by becoming a supplier. - Shadow
  





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Thu Apr 29, 2021 2:19 am
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blueca says...



a greedy tree and
its greedy inhabitants
only know profit
  





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Mon May 03, 2021 11:10 pm
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Buranko says...



"Only know profit"
The father bear told his son
Slurping fresh honey
  





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Mon May 03, 2021 11:31 pm
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queenshadowgem says...



slurping fresh honey
is exactly how water
should feel when its drank
Respect is a valued commodity with high demand and low quantity, so build yourself a fortune by becoming a supplier. - Shadow
  





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Thu May 06, 2021 6:39 am
Liminality says...



should feel when its drank
the dew on a lily pad
same as pond water
    Here for the in-betweens and the left-behinds, the unconsidered,
    the out-of-this-world.

  • Pronouns? Any, to be honest!
  • I spend a sizeable chunk of my time in Poem a Week and the Worst Poem thread.
  • You can also come yell at me in WFPs.
  








Defeat has its lessons as well as victory.
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