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Haiku Train



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Points: 962
Reviews: 56
Thu Feb 25, 2021 4:47 pm
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JoyDark says...



Turbulence stands still
In the moments after birth;
Child with mother.
she/her

woah
i actually made a post
pretty radical if you ask me
  





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Thu Feb 25, 2021 5:02 pm
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yosh says...



turbulence stands still
as my graceful wings reach out
to touch the night sky
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Wed Mar 03, 2021 12:27 pm
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Liminality says...



To touch the night sky,
the smoke plume spirals, tangling
ashen tree branches.
she/her

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Wed Mar 03, 2021 3:50 pm
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JoyDark says...



Ashen tree branches
Leave trails of smoke like charcoal
Across a scorched sky.
she/her

woah
i actually made a post
pretty radical if you ask me
  





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Wed Mar 03, 2021 4:16 pm
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alliyah says...



~~~~~~

crossing scorched sky, i
become a shooting star - bright
and unstoppable.

~~~~~~
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Wed Mar 03, 2021 4:32 pm
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Spearmint says...



Who’s unstoppable?
Maybe sky, earth, you or me
Perhaps everyone
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Wed Mar 03, 2021 5:00 pm
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fatherfig says...



perhaps ev'ryone
who sees raindrop plagued trees sees
fairies reflected
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu Mar 11, 2021 10:50 am
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Liminality says...



Fairies reflected
in a nighttime lake, beside
curls of jade ivies.
she/her

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Thu Mar 11, 2021 1:19 pm
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JoyDark says...



Curls of jade ivies
Stretch up a brick wall, trying
To reach what’s beyond.
she/her

woah
i actually made a post
pretty radical if you ask me
  





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Thu Mar 11, 2021 1:25 pm
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fatherfig says...



to reach what's beyond
the saplings leaves stretch upwards
glistening with dew
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu Mar 11, 2021 3:35 pm
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Spearmint says...



glistening with dew
the emerald leaves climb up
into the dark sky
mint, she/her


.--. / ... ...- -.-. .-.. / - .--. ..- .- / .--- --- ...- .--- / .--- --- .--. .-- / .--. .--- .-.. / .--- -.-- .-.. .... -
=D
  





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Thu Mar 11, 2021 6:31 pm
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yosh says...



into the dark sky
my broken, bruised wings flutter
cluttered forever
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Sat Mar 13, 2021 4:35 pm
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Liminality says...



Cluttered forever,
my drawers; fluttering with
half-used sticky notes.
she/her

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Sat Mar 13, 2021 4:51 pm
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yosh says...



half-used sticky notes
half-dreamed dreams forever lost
lost in the shadows
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Sat Mar 13, 2021 10:09 pm
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fatherfig says...



lost in the shadows
times i embraced taken, plucked
like cherry blossoms
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  








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