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Haiku Train



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542 Reviews


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Points: 41664
Reviews: 542
Fri Dec 18, 2020 4:26 pm
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Liminality says...



Fly bobbing ahead
into night through the window,
a speck on white moon.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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160 Reviews


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Sat Dec 19, 2020 2:33 pm
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Valkyria says...



A speck on white moon,
the little astronaut dreams;
someday, he'll come home.
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  





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158 Reviews


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Sat Dec 19, 2020 8:26 pm
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Hkumar says...



someday, he'll come home
to complete his family,
that was left broken.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Wed Dec 30, 2020 5:27 pm
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yosh says...



that was left broken,
in pieces and shattered shards,
angrily cuts me
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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542 Reviews


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Sun Jan 03, 2021 4:38 am
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Liminality says...



Angrily cuts me,
the slice of morning light through
blue curtains half-drawn.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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129 Reviews


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Sun Jan 03, 2021 2:44 pm
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yosh says...



blue curtains half-drawn,
blinds half-raised, windows half-closed,
my ambivalence.
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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455 Reviews


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Sun Jan 03, 2021 5:48 pm
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Hijinks says...



this ambivalence -
it feels like clarity but
it tastes like poison.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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66 Reviews


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Sun Jan 03, 2021 5:56 pm
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Starve says...



It tastes like poison
and feels like being buried in
someone else's grave
  





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Sun Jan 03, 2021 10:30 pm
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JoyDark says...



Someone else’s grave
May be showered in flowers—
My grave remains bare.
she/her

woah
i actually made a post
pretty radical if you ask me
  





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542 Reviews


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Wed Jan 20, 2021 4:02 am
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Liminality says...



My grave remains bare,
with wild fall winds carving in
these new epitaphs.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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455 Reviews


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Sat Jan 23, 2021 1:33 am
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Hijinks says...



these new epitaphs
though engraved just yesterday
already grow moss.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Thu Jan 28, 2021 6:12 pm
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quitecontrary says...



There rarely grows moss
in glacial climates like mine;
new hope brings soft springs.
"It is only through shadows that one comes to know the light."
- St. Catherine of Sienna

"One of the most cowardly things ordinary people do is to shut their eyes to facts."
- C.S. Lewis
  





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542 Reviews


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Wed Feb 03, 2021 9:17 am
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Liminality says...



New hope brings soft springs
to the layers of field grass;
sprinklers now switched on.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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Wed Feb 24, 2021 8:36 pm
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Hijinks says...



sprinkles of rain fall
on my palm, forming rivers
in the small creases.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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105 Reviews


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Reviews: 105
Wed Feb 24, 2021 10:39 pm
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fatherfig says...



in the small creases
of mother nature's mind's eye
turbulence stands still
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  








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