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Sat Aug 30, 2008 11:18 am
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SunshineOrange says...



Okay okay.

I want a new star ^^ Sooo, it's time for you all to post your links here and I will review them all! Oh yes, but you must.. Give me vitual boo-berry muffins!

-Drooled.- Yummy.

So c'mon folks. Step right up.

Things I will review;

- Any Kind of Poetry
- Romantic Fiction
- Fantasy Fiction
- Action/Adventure Fiction
- Lyrics
- Photography & Art

Completed;

"Ours" by Azila
"A Bloodied Rose; Part One" by Tabithalillian
Last edited by SunshineOrange on Fri Sep 19, 2008 11:34 am, edited 3 times in total.
Ehh Maii Gawwwsh, it's GingerLizzy, on a different profile!

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Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:53 pm
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Azila says...



No requests yet? I'll start it off: post419983.html#419983

It's called "Ours" and it's in Other Fiction... I hope that's okay with you?

Thank you! And please let me know if there's anything I can crit in return. :)
~Azila~
  





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Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:34 pm
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Tabithalillian says...



ok, please review my two storys, one may be a short story and one is a work in progress and much longer. . .here are the links both a romantic vampire fiction and I am trying to break free fromt he twilight mold with both of them:
A Bloodied Rose:
topic35039.html
My Take On Phantom Of The Opera:

topic35505.html
Living in a tower
  





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Mon Sep 22, 2008 9:16 am
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SunshineOrange says...



Come one! Roll up, roll up!

Next please ;D
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Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:42 am
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Icaruss says...



topic35447.html

Would you, please? =D
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Sat Sep 27, 2008 1:49 pm
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deleted2 says...



Heya,

I've finished the review of your story, by the way, so go check it out :D

Would you review this for me:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36307.html

Thanks !

XxxDo
  





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Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:11 pm
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KJ says...



If you have time, I need a lot of help with this story: topic27228.html

If you get around to it, I would appreciate it...
  





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Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:09 pm
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olivia1987uk says...



If you wouldn't mind....

topic36769.html
Olivia
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Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:46 pm
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fun4eva says...



If you don't mid I'd like reviews for chapter 3 and 4 of my novel...
And umm...don't worry you don't have to read the previous chapters to understand this one...
YOu may be a bit confused with the characters intoduced previously but that won't be much of a problem...waiting for you review!!!

Thsanks a ton in advance!!!

topic36721.html

topic36734.html
  





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Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:30 pm
zoorah12 says...



Please.


topic41007.html
I read somewhere... how important it is in life not necessarily to be strong... but to feel strong.
  





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Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:40 pm
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Night Mistress says...



topic41359.html

can you review this for me?
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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