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Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:17 am
TNCowgirl says...



Alright, so I'm not good at the grammer crits. I can normally do those if I have color changers and I haven't figured out the picture things yets.

SO!! I'm offering readers crits, basiclly what they are is where I'll read it and tell you if it is good, what a reader would want and so on. A big thing for me is to be able to picture the story in my head. It takes a lot to be able to do that, but it is possible. SO if you would like me to crit yours then please leave me the url to it here!! I'm better at Romance, but I can do anything. Well except poetry, I'm not really that good at those. Infact I'm no good at them. :D
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Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:27 am
Prokaryote says...



I'll bite.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27568.html

If you want me to critique anything of yours, send me a PM. :)

Prokaryote
  





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Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:30 am
BigBadBear says...



topic27261.html

This is a romance that I think you'll like

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
  





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Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:34 am
chocoholic says...



I'd love any crit's I can get on my new novel,

topic27154.html
topic27483.html

Thanks heaps.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*
  





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Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:09 am
TNCowgirl says...



THis is mostly just for me to know what I have done and haven't.

Choc- yours are done. I did your first cause they were sorter and my brain didn't want to read a lot of text at the moment.

BBB- Yours is done.

Prok- I will get to yours soon, don't worry. If I dont give me a simple nudge. :D
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Sat Mar 29, 2008 8:15 pm
mandylynn16 says...



Perfect! I've been needing a crit on my new story, but haven't gotten very many.

Here it is:

topic27723.html
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Sat Mar 29, 2008 9:04 pm
OverEasy says...



Here is the first and second chapters to my new Romance story. It's not really what I normally do, so bare with me.

topic27574.html

topic27616.html

Please and thank you!
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Sun Mar 30, 2008 5:41 am
Wolf says...



In my portfolio, 'Alphess: part one' and 'NN -- Prologue: Dark water, Pale flame' need your love! :)

Thanks!
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


Would you like a review?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html
  





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Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:04 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Mandy--- I can't read yours right now it is WAY to long (i have a headache). If I don't get it then remind me.

OverEasy- Yours are done. Good job

Wolf--- I'll have to get to yours later too. Remind me if I don't. :D They look good, mostly because they are about wolves, I need to learn more about them for the story I am writing so your stories might help. :D
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Wed Apr 02, 2008 3:49 am
Kurokiba says...



Here's an Werewolf story that you can crit............................

topic27531.html

thank u..........................
Want to crit my story:
topic27531.html


When the gates of Heaven and Hell open for the epic battle where will you stand I'll be on earth watching wanna join..................................
  





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Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:24 pm
JFW1415 says...



If you have time, I'd love a review on this. It looks long, but it's really just a lot of short paragraphs, so...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

If you want a review, please let me know! I want another star. :wink:

~JFW1415
  





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Sat Apr 19, 2008 11:13 pm
WriterAddict12356 says...



I need you to crit everything in my portfolio.
Hello, my name is (insert name here) and I am a writeaholic. "Got YWS?"
  





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Mon May 05, 2008 1:19 am
TNCowgirl says...



Hey, if you want me to crit you work bump me. If I haven't done yours and you asked tell me if you still want me to do it.
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Fri Jun 06, 2008 6:09 am
RandomGrrl says...



Hey, I got a piece in Other called Intuition that could use a crit. It's in 5 parts, and it's "finished," so feel free to take a look!

topic29344.html

Thanks! PM me if you need something,
:D RG
  





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Fri Oct 10, 2008 11:05 pm
vox nihili says...



I've got a piece I'd love a review on. A Living Nightmare..it's kind of..well, I don't know what it is, exactly.
It isn't complete yet, but I'm working on it....
topic36402.html

Thanks! :D
  








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