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Miss Mayhalm's Home for Incorrigible Youths [OOC]



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Wed Mar 15, 2023 3:50 am
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Abcdefg1 says...



Blaze is looking for Mary right now, but she can be found by a security guard if you like.
  





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Wed Mar 15, 2023 4:11 am
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Wed Mar 15, 2023 4:35 am
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KocoCoko says...



I'd actually really like if Blaze is the one to find her, too. I think it'd make for a nice moment :)
Though, just one more thing @Lucrezia, will more kids be called into Mayhalm's office? I just figured since Odessa was that others will be too, and once Mary is found they might deduce she's the screamer and all that. Just wondering!
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Sun Mar 19, 2023 3:04 pm
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KocoCoko says...



Aww, cute! Mary looks like she's finally given up 'talking sense' to them lol. And looking back seems to be Blaze's favorite angle.

Also, on another note, I just realized that I completely forget to add glasses onto Mary's design when I first made her and I'm only just remembering it! It might be too late to go and change that now...
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Mon Mar 20, 2023 12:03 am
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Abcdefg1 says...



'Tis quite beautiful, as the old English people say. Great job!

I also like Mary, she's so sweet <33333

I was working on some of my own art for this RP, but artist's block AAAAAAAAAAAAA
Nothing was looking right :(
  





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Mon Mar 20, 2023 1:03 am
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I did not expect everyone to be so receptive to Mary, but it's super nice you guys like her! And don't worry, Ari. I'm pretty sure anything you make is gonna be awesome :) !

Oh, and just as a little funny done in boredom, well here's a thing I made of Odessa saying Mary isn't scary or intimating, to which Mary tries to prove her wrong. She fails, but she's got the spirit.
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(she's very threatening guys trust me)


And finally, about Odessa having irrational hate of Mary, I'd like to predict that the 2nd image is Mary and Odessa's relationship for (I'm guessing) 40% of the story.
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Mon Mar 20, 2023 12:14 pm
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So, I just posted something of Blaze finding Mary and went in depth of her psyche and background and...
Oml after writing and rereading it I am torturing this poor girl...
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Tue Mar 21, 2023 11:33 pm
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Wed Mar 22, 2023 12:26 am
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KocoCoko says...



Oooh. Very exciting!! Can't wait for the downfall more of the headmistress!

Also uh, speaking of her... I'm in a bit of a dilemma. I'm still debating on whether or not Mary would be questioned by police or sent to Miss Mayhalm. I doubt I'd really be able to portray her, though, since she just arrived and all. Sooo... yeah. Any thoughts?
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Wed Mar 22, 2023 1:13 am
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KocoCoko says...



Yeah, there's no way I could do that. I could write fine maybe, and but trying her reactions to Mary being... Mary? Woof. I'd need a lot of guidance for just one bit of dialouge.
So, I'll probably just go with something else :(
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