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LMS VI: Under the Palm Tree



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Mon Aug 08, 2022 6:19 am
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«Under the Palm Tree»
PREMISE
Levan and Emyros are two 'friends' who live in the idyll lands of Greater Eden. The two are adolescents who are about to grow as young adults through a sacred passage of rite. However, everything changes under a palm tree.

After activating the awakening of an ancient force know as 'the Bee', Greater Eden is in danger and the two boys are forced to go into the Areas of Lesser Eden, where dangerous demons and perilous humans who seek revenge.

Using the Bee as a helper of their perilous quest, Levan and Emyros return to Greater Eden to find that they were too late... Or did something happen?

Who or what exactly is the Bee? Why was Greater Eden not like before when the two boys left? Who or what caused it? Explore the World of Greater Eden and Lesser Eden with Levan and Emyros as the two search for their arcane truths.
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Mon Aug 08, 2022 6:22 am
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TABLE OF CONTENTS

000 - The Awakening of the Bee
001 - That One Damned Tree
002 - Off to Lesser Eden!
003 - ○X of Aperion
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Wed Sep 07, 2022 1:58 pm
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The Awakening of the Bee

She was the greatest of all times
The daughter of the Lightning
And the son of fierious red flames
They were both a he and a she

The Bee's identity was like water
Becoming frozen when cold
And vanishing when it was hot
Yet at times they would be visible

He raised his scepter in judgment
And slashed the wicked liars
The usurpers had given up crowns
As they praised her under a tree

The palm tree she symbolizes
The Bee was adorned and praised
Until the humans had revolted
And sealed her into dark demise
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Wed Sep 14, 2022 1:18 pm
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A palm tree holds a beehive
Flowers bloom below
Children run across the tree
But the adults warn a tale

"Don't knock the beehive"
They alerted the tykes
But two boys ignored heeds
Tumbling into a flower garden

And the green light glows
Screams fill the Great Eden
Demons come and run havoc
For they come for revenge

The two boys run for life
Warriors protect citizens
Angels were flying across
"Protect the humans!"

So friend, we all ran away
Into the red forest of blood
But some were not alive
As the demons have slain

This night is filled with chaos.
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Fri Sep 23, 2022 1:27 am
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Off to mysterious Eden
Where God abandoned
Into the mysterious Eden
Where monsters dwell

The flourished land is dim
Light and color escaped
Drained away by mischief
Stolen by an evil trickster

Off to peculiar Less Eden
Where humans still shreik
To prison named Less Eden
Where prisoners mourn

Nothing but desolation
The void recipes, with demons
Sinners are thrown in plains
Where the sky is to be purple

Glowing supernatural light
And a blue moon rises
Two boys venture perils
In order to redeem themselves

The Bee shall guide the two
As an act of fulfillment
The others are to wait
And watch the adventures

Of the two boys exploring
This new mysterious world
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Sun Oct 02, 2022 12:07 am
Kelisot says...



The Beast who guards the Fortress,
Guardians and Father of all demons.
His name strikes terror even to him,
Warriors have cried to gods for help.

The Ox of Aperion, that's his new name
The entrance to Inferno is guarded
By his mighty claymore and axe
Laughing triumphantly and feasting blood

When two boys saw him, neither
Had trembled with fright
But stood with courage as the Goddess
Of Strength sang a ballad of healing

And struck the beast with their swords
With the victory, came back to their homes.
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