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Sat Jan 22, 2022 12:23 am
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JamesPeterson says...



Alright, real quick, I just want you guys to know I made a change to the world, so check out the storybook for details.
First, there is the addition of the Pearl Demon :D They have four arms, and are pretty common. (If you really want to change to that, you can, but.... well revision :P)
Second, the source of all demon's magic is called the Tenebris now, so thats a thing. I don't know if that will be important, but it can come up in reference to enrich the world and such.
Third and final, demons hearts are their types. So a ruby has a large, magical ruby looking crystal instead of a beating heart. This gives them life and a connection to the Tenebris.

Phew, there! Now, to work on the next post I go! :)
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Sat Jan 22, 2022 12:58 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



Okay, sounds awesome!
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Sat Jan 22, 2022 4:58 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



First part of the post looks great, James! (Only question I had was since they’re in hell, would he say “whatever god is out there”, or would he just say “god”? Or possibly Satan? Hmm…)
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Sat Jan 22, 2022 5:25 am
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Well for this hell, I don't think there's actually a Satan. One idea I had was that lots of people over the years try to claim to be and try to take control of Hell or whatever.
I had him say whatever God because he doesn't know what God he believes in, whether it's Satan or something else. Just his character I suppose haha.
But thanks :D
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Sat Jan 22, 2022 5:27 am
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One issue im trying to avoid is giving Risius plot armor or 'main character energy' haha. His abilities seem powerful but I've come up with some equal downsides I think. And he does have his abilities for a reason, so that's not just cause I didn't want to choose one of the nine variants.
Just something I need to be careful of.
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Sun Jan 23, 2022 2:52 am
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Spearmint says...



The world changes look good, and I like the first part of the post, James! Duct tape is indeed wonderful xD
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Sat Feb 05, 2022 5:36 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



How’s the next part of the post coming along? : )
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Thu Feb 10, 2022 5:11 am
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Ok, sorry about that, its gonna be up by the end of the week! :D
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Tue May 10, 2022 1:08 am
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Heyyyy! So time definitely didn't slip away from me >.> you doing alright, @JamesPeterson?
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Sat Jun 25, 2022 10:47 pm
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Omni says...



Hey peeps! Just wanted to poke this roleplay as it's getting close to being archived. How's it going? Are you all still writing or interested in writing?
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Sun Jun 26, 2022 11:47 pm
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I'm still interested >.> but either way's fine with me! :] @JamesPeterson, @winterwolf0100, @Terian805?
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Mon Jun 27, 2022 12:26 am
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winterwolf0100 says...



I’m up for it!
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Mon Jun 27, 2022 4:17 am
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I'm up for it too! Sorry I let it slack for so long, a lot of stuff happened recently :D
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Mon Jun 27, 2022 4:23 am
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And hey @winterwolf100, If it's not too much, I was wondering if you could start us off again with the next post? I seem to have hit a block with Risius, but I'm sure your wonderful ideas will catapult us forward :D
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Mon Jun 27, 2022 2:09 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



I’m sure I can put something together. :] I’ll need to reread some to figure out where we were
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omni played robin hood, stole winter's brain cell ~Silver
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