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Sun Jan 24, 2021 11:00 pm
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TheRealEuphoria says...



I submitted my profile for Polina, I hope it's okay! I wanted to make her a little bit different. I hope its okay that she doesn't actually have any magic. I tried to make it as equivalent to it as possible
"Our life is one big, proverbial coin toss." -Damon Salvatore
  





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Sun Jan 24, 2021 11:14 pm
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Yoshikrab says...



@TheRealEuphoria excellent question! I think it would be okay if Polina doesn't have any distinguishable magic, if you get what I mean. I love her so far! But I kind of want every character to have magic, you know? I guess it would be fine if her magic was just something like "Oh I can survive with less sleep" or something less noticeable. Or you could have her magic as inhuman stamina-- hence her becoming a freaking jackie chan at 13.

BUT if you feel like it's helpful to the plot line that Polina has no magic, then the martial arts prodigy is FINE WITH ME :)
When life brings you down, don't care at all, because the last thing you want is life being smug over it's victory against you. -yoshi

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Mon Jan 25, 2021 12:40 am
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TheRealEuphoria says...



No, absolutely! I love the idea of inhuman stamina. I'll go ahead and add that.
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Wed Jan 27, 2021 8:38 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



Okay, I submitted my character for approval! Hopefully they look good! : )
  





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Mon Feb 01, 2021 5:45 pm
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winterwolf0100 says...



Also, sorry for double-posting, but I just wanted to say I'm excited for this storybook!
  





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Sun Feb 21, 2021 12:56 am
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Yoshikrab says...



daaaang i forgot about this too

OKAY so maybe we should start?
When life brings you down, don't care at all, because the last thing you want is life being smug over it's victory against you. -yoshi

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Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:46 am
winterwolf0100 says...



Haha, yeah I’m good with that!
  





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Sun Feb 21, 2021 2:27 am
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Yoshikrab says...



okay i'll get the first post in tomorrow at the earliest

@TheRealEuphoria has actually been missing from the site for a while, so we'll just start without her :(
When life brings you down, don't care at all, because the last thing you want is life being smug over it's victory against you. -yoshi

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Sun Feb 21, 2021 4:32 am
winterwolf0100 says...



Yeah, I noticed they’d been gone for a few weeks. That sounds good!
  





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Mon Feb 22, 2021 2:18 am
winterwolf0100 says...



Alrighty, I guess that means I’m up next! I’ll start working on something and have it up in the next few days : )
  





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Mon Feb 22, 2021 7:16 am
winterwolf0100 says...



Okie-dokie, apologies for triple-posting, but I just churned out a first post for Lea and ended up posting it! I'd love to know your thoughts, Yoshikrab!
  





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Mon Feb 22, 2021 8:49 pm
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Yoshikrab says...



I love it! Maybe Amoku just skimmed the letter and only took the most important information? And then just struck off on his own? That would be the most probable reason that Amoku didn't join her on the flight.
When life brings you down, don't care at all, because the last thing you want is life being smug over it's victory against you. -yoshi

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Mon Feb 22, 2021 9:37 pm
winterwolf0100 says...



Yeah. I also made sure to include that they only gave her a ticket because they knew her financial situation, and that otherwise she’d have no way to go there to accept it.
  





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Fri Feb 26, 2021 11:52 pm
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Spearmint says...



Hi, I noticed there's a few spots open here! The concept of sponsors sounds really cool too ^_^ Can I join?
My idea for a character:
Spoiler! :

Name: Rory Travail

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Appearance: Messy dark hair and violet eyes, average height.

Role: Sponsor

Magic: Can blur a person's recent memories

Personality: Can be charming if he wants to, although he rarely wants to. Is usually a bit aloof.

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Sat Feb 27, 2021 12:35 am
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Yoshikrab says...



Sure! We ARE desperately in need of people, so thank you very much for joining!

Your character is great! Excited to see the contrasts between personalities here!

You can post next if you want btw.
When life brings you down, don't care at all, because the last thing you want is life being smug over it's victory against you. -yoshi

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