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Mon Oct 26, 2020 4:21 am
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SilverNight says...



“And the nervous fellow hovering by, looking like they might pass out if someone did as much as breathe in their direction.”

@soundofmind, wonderful job at summarizing Nikolai in a sentence so perfectly. That’s so him.
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 4:32 am
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soundofmind says...



Ahh sorry Cyr!! EDITED FOR YOU

and also lol ur welcome shadow
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 4:39 am
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Teddybear says...



Wonderful 8)


She's gonna be unresponsive for a few posts, so I'll wait. In the meantime, if the doc tries to check her vitals, she'll be mostly normal unless he checks her eyes. For one, she's got the whole heterochromia thing going on, and for two, her pupils won't react to the light at all and the one of her right (doc's left) will seem to glow slightly.

Other than that, like I said, she's fine. She'll wake up in a minute.

Also, the idea of Ruthie trying to give her tips on her magic has the same vibes as the one uncle who's low-key an alcoholic whom you only see once a year at family reunions trying to teach all the grandkids how to pick a lock and, idk, light beehives on fire or something.

Just, pure chaos mixed with 'I guess he would know' from the 'student'.
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 9:19 am
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Mageheart says...



I woke up to so many posts oh my gosh.

(In a good way, though!)

I'll try getting a post up soon to have Raptor react to everything. :)
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 10:01 am
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Posted! I wanted Raptor to say something, but then I decided it was best to keep him in his head. I even fleshed him out with a brand new memory, so I'm pretty happy with how my post turned out. <3
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 1:37 pm
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Ljungtroll says...



That's great, Mage!!
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 5:59 pm
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Posted again!

At first I was sad that I hadn't given Raptor any herbs he could use to wake Eira up with, but then I realized that there was a good substitute. It might not have been needed, but it was definitely fun to include. :P
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 6:26 pm
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Carina says...



I took 10 min to quickly write up a post during my break but Cyr beat me to it asdfhghjdksn it's no longer relevant so I thought I'd instead dump it here for your amusement lol

Spoiler! :
Mel was fascinated by the floating poisoned blood that Eira somehow controlled, but she was definitely not impressed that it almost splashed on to her. Luckily she stepped back just in time so it didn't get on her shoes or clothes.

While Dr. Archer went back to tending to the poor man who just had a ball of blood removed from him, Mel sauntered over and crouched next to the passed-out Eira. Raptor took the bottle of wine she had opened a little bit ago and held it close to Eira's mouth.

"Good idea!" Mel said, wrapping her fingers around the bottom of the bottle and tilting it up so it was nearly upside-down and would splash on Eira's face.

That ought to wake her up. Good thing Raptor thought of using the resources around them by using the wine first; Mel almost used her water instead.
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 6:30 pm
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Lol, yeah that would have made Eira's day even worse. Sorry for cutting ahead
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 6:32 pm
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UR GOOD!! probably for the best so Eira won't start off hating Mel lol, although Mel would totally have pinned it on Raptor :P
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Mon Oct 26, 2020 6:34 pm
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Sorry for the short post, I've kinda got a lot going on right now. I'll try to follow along and be more involved soon. <3
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Tue Oct 27, 2020 2:52 am
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soundofmind says...



Replied ! :)
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Tue Oct 27, 2020 2:57 am
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Teddybear says...



I have also replied. Eira has decided to deal with Ruthie the way she might deal with an obnoxious drunk. Passive aggressively.
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Tue Oct 27, 2020 3:06 am
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Carina says...



i just realized no one went to see what this ornate piece of cloth was about 👀
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Tue Oct 27, 2020 3:21 am
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Feel free to investigate!
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