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Sun Nov 22, 2020 5:34 pm
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Lia5Giba says...



Okay, I’m excited! I could have Rebecca looking for a birthday gift or something still, but she could also just be heading to the Internet cafe you mentioned to get away from her parents, who are fighting (which probably would not be comfortable to her), and Internet-surf. Maybe Caldrow realizes his sibling is nearby and changes Rebecca involuntarily into her costume, and essentially that’s when Tony sees her. Thoughts...?
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Sun Nov 22, 2020 5:40 pm
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Magebird says...



That sounds great to me! You could also have her leaving school to go look for a gift/go to the Internet cafe, since Tony definitely didn't get too far after school before Aster noticed his siblings. :)
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Mon Nov 23, 2020 12:25 am
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SirenCymbaline says...



@Magebird @Lia5Giba good luck guys I'm super excited for your next posts together

Can me and somebody else start lowkey planning a fight collab? Nothing serious but it's always good to think ahead
  





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Mon Nov 23, 2020 6:36 pm
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MadilynReads says...



Is it too late to join?
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Mon Nov 23, 2020 6:58 pm
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Haileyg21 says...



MadilynReads wrote:Is it too late to join?

you would hv to ask @Magebird
  





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Mon Nov 23, 2020 7:07 pm
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Magebird says...



@MadilynReads, I'm sorry, but this storybook is currently closed - we can't add anyone else to the cast. If that changes, though, I'll definitely let you know! :)

And you're interested in joining other storybooks, you can check out which ones are available over in the storybook subforum. Any storybook that has an "Accepting" tag next to the name is looking for new members! It's also a good idea to check with anyone who doesn't have the "Closed" tag - chances are the storybook's owner might have forgotten to add the "Accepting" tag.
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Mon Nov 23, 2020 7:09 pm
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MadilynReads says...



Perfect! Ok, thanks!
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Mon Nov 23, 2020 7:16 pm
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Magebird wrote:@MadilynReads, I'm sorry, but this storybook is currently closed - we can't add anyone else to the cast. If that changes, though, I'll definitely let you know! :)

And you're interested in joining other storybooks, you can check out which ones are available over in the storybook subforum. Any storybook that has an "Accepting" tag next to the name is looking for new members! It's also a good idea to check with anyone who doesn't have the "Closed" tag - chances are the storybook's owner might have forgotten to add the "Accepting" tag.

Hey speaking of which You should join Spirit acadime! its a magic school SB maybe youll like the idea behind it!
  





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Tue Nov 24, 2020 2:38 am
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TheMulticoloredCyr says...



Actually, I may drop out of this. I've kinda lost track of it and I'm not all that attached to my character(s) or anything. I don't want to hold the sb back and, considering how long it's been taking me to write posts for things I actually do somewhat care about, I'm afraid if I stayed here I'd end up holding it up until it just died.

Since @MadilynReads want's a spot, they can have mine if they like!
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Tue Nov 24, 2020 5:46 am
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MadilynReads says...



Is that something that works?
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Tue Nov 24, 2020 10:31 am
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Magebird says...



That's definitely something that works! I'm sorry that you aren't able to continue being in the storybook, @TheMulticoloredCyr, but @MadilynReads can definitely take your post!

@MadilynReads, you just need to make a character CP. Here's the template you need to use:

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[b]Human's Name:[/b]

[b]Alien's Name's Name:[/b]

[center][small-caps][b][i]human's name goes here[/i][/b][/small-caps][/center]

[b]Magical Girl Alias, If Present:[/b]

[b]Age + High School Year:[/b]

[b]Gender + Pronouns:[/b]

[b]Sexuality & Romance Availability:[/b]

[b]Appearance:[/b]

[b]Appearance when Transformed:[/b]

[b]Personality:[/b]

[b]Power Set:[/b]

[b]Brief History:[/b]

[b]Other:[/b]

[center][small-caps][b][i]alien's name goes here[/i][/b][/small-caps][/center]

[b]Age + Age Ranking:[/b]

[b]Personality:[/b]

[b]Motivations for Ruling Earth:[/b]

[b]Object/Animal They Possess:[/b]


The alien you'll be creating will be the second to youngest alien out of the six, so just keep that in mind while you're creating your character! And if you haven't already, definitely read through the DT and SB posts that have been made so far. It should give you a stronger idea of the plot. :)

Let me know if you have any questions!

(Also, if no one has any objections to it, I'll take down Cyr's post and CP and send both to them via PM so they have a copy/we don't make things confusing once Madilyn makes their characters.)
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Tue Nov 24, 2020 6:14 pm
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Welcome to the party, MadelineReads!
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They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
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Tue Nov 24, 2020 9:15 pm
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Magebird says...



@MadilynReads just posted their character profile for their human Julie and alien Argathem, so it looks like our current cast is all set! I also removed Mika's CP and post as well.

It's totally up to you what you want to do, Madilyn, but feel free to make an introductory post for Julie like we all did! You can also just skip to the action or have her meet Argathem in the same post as whatever fight scene you throw her into, but it's really up to you. <3

Let me know if you have any questions! Even if I can't respond right away, someone else in the storybook might be able to answer whatever questions you have. :)
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Wed Nov 25, 2020 12:53 pm
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Awesome first post, @MadilynReads! I love how you had Lyn noticing Iris at the mall. It was a cool little Easter egg that helps make the story more connected. :)
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Wed Nov 25, 2020 5:02 pm
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Ventomology says...



Omg @MadilynReads. The cameo. The "yikes." <3 Our characters should totally battle each other first and then be like 'wait I recognize you.'
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