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The Pheligian Falcon: Prison Break [OOC]



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Mon Mar 15, 2021 2:19 am
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Oxara says...



was literally about to poke mage before I saw his post earlier today lol
  





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Wed Mar 17, 2021 2:49 pm
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Magebird says...



I beat you to it. :P

Also, I'm hoping to write my post up next week! This week is going to be really busy for me, so I probably won't have enough down time to brainstorm and write it.

But I've been thinking of it. c:
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Fri Mar 19, 2021 11:37 pm
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Hi! Sorry for not posting in here yet. I really wanted to, but the last few days have been really hectic + draining. I'm hoping to get a post up sometime next week. :)
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Sat Mar 20, 2021 12:12 am
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soundofmind says...



DAS OK !! u valid was just poking u uwu
  





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Thu Apr 01, 2021 10:36 pm
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Magebird says...



I finally posted! It wasn't super long, but it felt natural to end it at the point that I was at. I really wanted to explore Lode's background in my post, and I think I was able to do that. c:

also i'm starting to realize baby!Lode is just Jason Todd/Robin from the Batman comics-
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Fri Apr 02, 2021 2:44 am
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soundofmind says...



I LOVES DA POSTIE MAGE

@Vincian would you wanna go next? maybe we could do a kaz and corden post :)
  





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Fri Apr 02, 2021 2:54 am
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Oxara says...



I just want more posts. MORE! I say!... but seriously no pressure but at the same time *puppy dog eyes*
  





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Tue Apr 13, 2021 7:04 am
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soundofmind says...



*pokes*

@Vincian HOW U? if u don’t think u can go next we can do other interactions!!
  





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Tue Apr 27, 2021 8:28 am
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soundofmind says...



Just a reminder that @Oxara and I are going to be collabbing tomorrow! It'll be at the date/time below (auto adjusted) if anyone wants to hop in or stop by!


We'll be in this pad!
  





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Tue Apr 27, 2021 11:22 am
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Thanks for the heads up, sound! I don't think I'll be able to hop on because of the timing, but it's good to know in case I'm up at 9:00 tomorrow night and free. <3
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Sun May 30, 2021 1:07 pm
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OKAY AM POSTING IN HERE FEW THINGS JUST TO GET clarity for me

I know @Vincian said he's gonna be working on a Corden post soon which is big excite - and IF YOU WANT ANYONE COLLABING WITH U VINCIAN ... or just lurking w/u in a pad.... let me know >_>

ALSO I BEEN THINKIN OF RAISING THE STAKES FOR CHARACTERS SO THEY ALL HAVE MOTIVE TO ESCAPEY

I know for Kaz I've been hinting at him being one more outburst away from his sentence being extended to life so he won't ever see his fam again, so he's like "hello. i would like to see my family or I'm going to literally murder someone"

And I think @Wolfi we've talked about Gena empathizing w/the prisoners, which I think you've already done a great job so far w/building her connections with them gradually

@Vincian and @mage I know u have discussed w/me privately.... >_> sekret motives

@Oxara I know for Ozirma you've mentioned that he's kind of just vibing and not really perturbed enough to think about escaping and only started considering it as something that might be fun, but I think what would be really great for his character development if we raised the stakes for him!!

I'm thinking maybe that the prison has had a better technology in development for detaining him that will effectively cancel out all of his powers, so he will be stuck in his current form, unable to shift and use any powers at all. We can workshop a BS sciencey technology that could do this, but I think if all of a sudden even his limited powers (like hacking into ships) are taken away that could be a HUGE motive for him to escape/get out of there!!! like "I WANT TO USE MY POWERS. THIS ISNT FUN ANYMORE"

LET ME KNOW IF U HAVE ANY IDEAS FOR A TECH SOLUTION TO make life hard for Ozirma

because we as writers know we just love to make life harder for our characters lmao

I am also very curious to see how Ozirma would react to suddenly being trapped in a normie body.... i feel like he would be very shaken, at least, ON THE INSIDE

IDK I WANT TO SEE IT....


anyways ok I'm done those are my brain thoughts

tl;dr - Vincian's working on a post rn

I'm making sure characters have developed and strong motives for wanting to escape this high security prison, knowing it'll be high-risk
  





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Thu Jun 17, 2021 8:05 pm
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Hello! I have posted!! I'm so sorry about the wait, I just started coming back to YWS at the end of May haha, but I hope you like the post!

I tried to raise the stakes for Corden through this post and we'll see that more when he meets with Isolde again. His walls are closing in on him. Please let me know what you think about the post ^^
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Fri Jun 18, 2021 11:37 am
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soundofmind says...



I LOVE THE DRAMA and that the walls are closing in on Corden
love seeing corden uncomfortable heehoo

also on that note >_>

@Oxara did u see my last message about raising the stakes for ozirma?? LEMME KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS

am thinking it would make sense to do an ozirma post next if we figure out how to raise the stakes for him

ORRRRRRR <_< a GENA POST??? @Wolfi?? OR... uh
KAZ???? AM UNSURE

if anyone has preferences or ideas uhhh LEMME KNOW
  








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