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Sun Sep 13, 2020 4:24 am
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soundofmind says...



YOU CAN DO IT OMNOM!! I BELIEVE IN U
  





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nonono i dont want it to be 10k XDD
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@Omnom @ScarlettFire @AlyTheBookworm @soundofmind @Chaser


The Prophecy Flows



The Prophecy has fluxed, revealing a Relic from the past to aid you in your journey. Something so valuable cannot be given freely, however.

For something to be given, something must be taken.

False idols have paved a path. This path is rooted in vines and thorns that corrupt any higher path to one of forgotten ideals. This is just the start. The further from the truth, the lower the crown stands. How low does it hang now? Remember.

The Prophecy Continues


  • Write a Post | One Point
  • Collaborate on a Post | One Point per Post (Up to Three)
  • Lengthen a Post | One Point per Thousand Words

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Completion Time: One Month

This challenge has expired! The number of posts that qualify for this is impressive, and the length of them was even more so! Although, @Chaser, it looks like you can claim some credits, so you should do that. (Otherwise, Omnom can just claim them for you.) :D

Ah, one more thing. Apparently, credits awarded per challenge aren't allowed to exceed six (let's actually limit it to five, for now, as the discussion among the staff is still ongoing), so the point per thousand words, while totally deserved, isn't strictly allowed to continue indefinitely.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Spring has returned! Winter is over, and BrumalHunter is no more!
  





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Okay, but like, this post might actually be 5 digits lol

Also, what are our plans after my post? I didn't even fully realize the last posting order and we blew past that one lol
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soundofmind says...



okay just gonna poop my ideas here which i also put in the pad

FEEL FREE TO ADD/EDIT/CHANGE/SUGGEST THINGS this is just me trying to compile ideas we had in the pad and idk

Ideas for after this post:

Tyri Post:

    -The port is surrounded by military ships
    -Mythica announces that she will start bombing the city until the fugitives are given back under her command < this they could hear more about while shoppin in the city
    -Paimon hides them in her father's house, but maybe it's broken from the fighting beforehand?
    -Still, they hide w/Paimon fam in what is left of the house and recover. Errybody getting bandaged up and resting for a moment
    -Tyri is probably the least banged up i think, so she volunteers to sneak out into the city in disguise to get some much needed supplies
    -Either Railyn or Paimon volunteer to go with - I can see Paimon, maybe
    -2 gals head into city in disguise and pick up things, maybe some of this can be timeskipped/summarized but we can compose a shopping list of things they def need to get. i assume the others would give them some of their money to make all the purchases
    -Maybe they have a close call on their way back to the others where they are almost recognized/caught but dont get turned in? maybe someone like, kinda subtly defends or distracts for them and gives little wink
    -They return to their paimon parents hideout with all the things[tm]
    -Errybody like ooo new stuff :) retail therapy LOL
    -ANYWAYS
    -They try to figure out how they will get out of Nua, they need a ship
    -They either decide on fisherman ship or important ship

Paimon Post:
Somewhere in here need to mention them going to island becuz of bluecough rumors and tie all that in idk

    -Sneak thru town down to docks w/supplies
    -Boarding the ship, either sneaking on and u know, mutiny, or uh, they make friendly w/captain - if the latter i feel like the fisherman one would work better. Also would be more chill in vibes and i can appreciate that
    -Finally get out to sea
    -Errybody can finally chill out for a moment becuz they didnt get caught and are AWAY from Nua and all that now,,, yesgood
    -Maybe calm cute and/or soft moment with paimon and the others idk

Eli Post:
    -eli seasick on boat. is sad. has moment with paimon and bel tryna help him not be seasick and he ends up crying in bels arms! sad
    -idk timeskip and mealttime and they see island in distance
    -any other little interactions we want to happen on the boat IDK
    -get to island

Dunno how to fit this in >>>> Omnom's Idea: The reason why the port is getting cleared is because the artifact is from Shurima. It was stolen for the Queen, and the royal guard is there to make sure of its secure transport. However, the ship itself never makes it to port, only its escorts. And Tyri and Eli research why. They board one of the ships, and everyone on board is dead from bluecough. This sets up the next arc nicely, as they go to the island.
  








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