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Fri Jul 12, 2019 6:02 am
Awru says...



Lol!!Since you call yourself a Swordsman obv smashboard is your best bet but That shield is sth you make with your hands in pretty colours and then smash in your enemies face.No additional load or anything.It also doesn't get damaged easily and reflects attacks like explosions and stuff.So your thinking more useful????
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Fri Jul 12, 2019 2:49 pm
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XxXTheSwordsmanXxX says...



Oh I was just making a joke along with a point. A shield is as useful as you make it. Take Captain America. He uses his shield to block and protect but he also flings it like a bullet, sleds down cliff faces, and keeps doors from closing by using it as a stand. A shield can have uses outside of battle. It's all about being creative with your ability. If it can retain heat, it can be turned and used as a cooking pan. A shield is as diverse as you make it.
  





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Mon Jul 15, 2019 7:18 am
Awru says...



Just so you know i wasn't serious either*wink* And u r right its all about how wild can u get.
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Wed Jul 17, 2019 6:35 am
Awru says...



Is Sapphire Fotia Drakon an acceptable name???
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Wed Jul 17, 2019 9:19 am
hiraeth says...



Of course!
I was eleven years old
and I'd lost my mother,
and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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Wed Jul 17, 2019 10:34 am
hiraeth says...



and my post will be up soon, just waiting for @Awru to submit her cp. (in fact, if you could just pm your character's name and alias to me, i'll be good to go :) ) no rush though take your time :D
I was eleven years old
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and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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Wed Jul 17, 2019 3:37 pm
Awru says...



Her name is Sapphire Fotia Drakon and her alias could be saph or anything i am not sure yet.I am sorry its taking too long but i have finally figured out everything just need to assemble all the info in proper form.
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Wed Jul 17, 2019 4:22 pm
hiraeth says...



take yer time :)
I was eleven years old
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and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

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Thu Jul 18, 2019 1:06 pm
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hiraeth says...



okay, so the post is up! @Awru like you said, i gave your character "Saph" as the alias, but since you aren't sure, tell me if you change your mind and i'll go and fix that :)
I was eleven years old
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and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

mA
  





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Thu Jul 18, 2019 1:45 pm
Liberty says...



Ahhhh, hiraeth you did a great job! Who's going next? Also, when does the race start? Now, or like in a few days or something? Aaaand, are you allowed to steal the artefacts...?
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Fri Jul 19, 2019 7:34 am
hiraeth says...



steal artefacts? from the castles? honey, that's what the Children do. But if you mean stealing from the other team once they have an artefact, then that would be a bad idea unless you want to start a dangerous feud. but it's not like it isn't allowed, though.....*wink wink*
I was eleven years old
and I'd lost my mother,
and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

mA
  





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Fri Jul 19, 2019 3:10 pm
Liberty says...



Steal atrefacts from the Children, I mean, yeah. Lol, I'm so doing that! ;) Watch out ya'll!!! Who's going next?
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Fri Jul 19, 2019 4:29 pm
hiraeth says...



well i was thinking alternate posts from a weaver and a scraper.... so @Liberty @AlyTheBookworm @Querencia and @Omnom any of you can claim next post
I was eleven years old
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and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

mA
  





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Fri Jul 19, 2019 4:34 pm
Liberty says...



I'll go if no one else claims a spot. But wait, when does the race start? Right now (in the book) or after a day or something?
A rose has thorns but many times we only mention the thorns and we do not mention the rose. And with these thorns we are also pricking others, we are hurting them.
  





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Fri Jul 19, 2019 4:39 pm
hiraeth says...



depends on ya. do you want your character to have some time for prep, some loose ends to cover, some backstory to get done with? or just get on with the flying alrdy? your choice.
I was eleven years old
and I'd lost my mother,
and my soul.
And the crucible
gave me you.

mA
  








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